No.12梯队第26次作业贴，作业截止时间6月22日晚9点
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[/font][/size][size=3]31. Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion. [/size]
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[font=Arial][size=3]1. 改变之前队员各自发作业贴的方式(修改的时候不容易找到::z8 ),请大家在[color=darkorange]此作业贴后跟帖交作业::16 [/color]
2. 写好的作文最好先用word的拼写检查工具查一下然后再上传[/size][/font][/size]
[size=2][font=Arial][size=3]3. 修改的内容最好别的颜色作记号，[color=red]红色[/color]表示错误，[color=blue]蓝色[/color]表示建议，[color=green]绿色[/color]表示值得学习的句子。[/size][/font][/size]
[size=2][font=Arial][size=3]4. 作业的批改采用轮换方式，促进大家相互交流学习。每次互改作业的名单在作业发布帖中给出。我会另外发一个批改作业贴，大家在后面跟帖交批改好的作文，回帖的标题格式为 xxx改xxx的作业，如: [color=darkorange]sorcier 改kkconquer的作业[/color]
5. 每周的周三和周六发布新作业[/size][/font][/size]
[font=Arial][size=3]6. [color=darkorchid]关于交作业的问题:[/color][/size][/font]
[font=Arial][size=3]考虑到大家的工作学习安排等各种原因可能不能及时完成作业，所以现在活动的截止时间推后一天，比如周三的活动，周日截止。[color=red]在截止时间过后提交的作业，[/color][color=red]可以不予修改[/color]。[/size][/font][font=Arial][size=3]另外关于修改作业，给够充足的时间期限：一周，截止时间同样为晚上9点，[color=red]未能在截止时间内完成修改的，暂停其活动一次。[/color][/size][/font]
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[size=2][font=Arial][size=3]第26次作业批改安排如下:
队员ID: 冰岛哲学C kkconquer 蛇小萌 Sailing ANDY_HD 冬眠zzz
[font=Arial][size=3]修改人: butterfly Sailing 冰岛哲学C collins82 [font=Helvetica]zly901212 [/font]ANDY_HD[/size][/font]
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[size=3]队员ID: sorcier butterfly collins82 [font=Helvetica]zly901212[/font] 风舞九天0107 七月七日晴
修改人: kkconquer 蛇小萌 风舞九天0107 冬眠zzz 七月七日晴 sorcier[/size][/font][/size][/font][/size]
[[i] 本帖最后由 Sorcier 于 2008-6-18 20:31 编辑 [/i]]
交作业！
[font=Times New Roman][align=left][size=12pt][size=4]As the transportation system becomes better, it is more convenient for people to move around and search for more satisfied life. Many people, especially young people, move fairly frequently. They are eager to look for a better job chance, more suitable living condition, more convenient community or even more comfortable climate. However, as for me, I would rather stay in one place instead of make changes very often.[/size][/size][/align][align=left][size=12pt][size=4][/size][/size][/align]
[align=left][size=12pt][size=4]The first reason why I prefer a stable place is that people have to face so many challenges when entering a whole new circumstance, particularly the need for dealing with strangers. The first challenge would be to get your new rooms cleaned and well-arranged. That would be really annoying for me. The more challenged task coming after is to make acquaintance with your boss, your colleges, your neighbors and even your child's new teachers. People have to build up relationships all from the very beginning. Aren't all these really horrible? [/size][/size][/align][align=left][size=12pt][size=4][/size][/size][/align]
[size=12pt][size=4]Another fact that I am not for frequent moving is that people have to consider more about the others, especially for those that are close and important to them, for example families. Your parents may be in wanting of living near you, however if you get changed frequently, they would gradually feel lonely when seeing their child becomes more and more difficult. Man would better be considerate for their families and friends and not think only for themselves.[/size][/size]
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[size=12pt][size=4]In addition, although a large amount of people maintain that people have their rights to pursue for better life, and they also believe that making changes would get them more chances. Nevertheless, in my opinion, they fail to notice that making changes does not simply mean moving around. One needs to improve himself, adapt to the current situation, and try to do his best before making a decision of jumping to other positions. Adhering to the same old place does not mean one would have fewer opportunities. Usually it is one’s effort matters.[/size][/size]
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[size=12pt][size=4]Moving to a new place may be a good choice for some people, however I am strongly against constant transitions. By staying and adapting to the current situation, man does not need to confront with difficulties of getting accustomed to new environments, man may not hurt their beloved people's feelings. Therefore, I strongly recommend living a stable life.[/size][/size]
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[[i] 本帖最后由 蛇小萌 于 2008-6-19 22:29 编辑 [/i]] [font=Calibri][size=4]When it comes to the question whether you would stay at on place for a life time, most of Chinese would offer a definite yes answer without any hesitation, for our traditional tendency to live in one place for a whole life. However, with the significant development of economy, more people would make another choice: they drift from one city to another in order to find a better job and living. Personally, I absolutely prefer the living style of the later one. [/size][/font]
[font=Calibri][size=4]People who stay at one place claim that it is so difficult to rebuild your life in a strange environment. Your social relationship and career in previous city would leave without nothing. It is true that it won't be easy to reverse your live in an unfamiliar city, but what your have found before would be anything but trash. In fact, the friends living in previous cities are still your friends and your career would become your experience which would never be taken away. In this sense, moving to another city does not mean that losing everything. On the contrary, it benefits a lot for social relationship and career competence are all enhanced.[/size][/font]
[font=Calibri][size=4]What's more, it helps you stay energetic and keep passion to live to drift. You must have heard about the famous experiment on fogs. Researchers put a fog into boiling water and it jumped out to survive, while it was put in cold water which was boiled gradually and died. As same as this case, we would lose our passion when we have stayed at one place for a long time. It is the human nature to turn lazy in a comfortable situation. They would be too familiar with their job and living to make a difference in live. Yet, moving to a strange place, you are forced to make new friends and learn more far-reaching knowledge. For the most important thing, you never abandon your dream and you still try your best to approach to it. This is the meaning of life.[/size] [/font]
[font=Calibri][size=4]Taking into account of all these factors, I may draw the conclusion that a drifting live for a better living would be my optimal choice. I can get to be acquainted with varieties of people and knowledge, as well as keep my live with hope, energy and passion.[/size] [/font]
交作业
A lot of people like travelling, which enrishes one's experience and widen his/ger perspective. Similarly, some people prefer to live in one place and move to another from time to time. In this way, they keep on travelling to many places, satisfying their need for fresh feeling, local culture, and new chance. Though many people enjoy the process of adapting themselves to new surroundings. A lot others favor staying at one place. Both have some appealings and one should make decision according to his/her own condition.Moving to another place is like an adventure, especially when you have no friends or families in that city. You have to take full responsibility of yourself and handle all the trivials of life with your own effort. Compared with local people, you have less advantages in competition. One of such case is job hunting. Companies prefer to employ those who have already has a stable living but not those who rent everything. They may have to pay extra cost to help you settle down. So living in another city seems to have many problems to face.
However, living in another city generates many positive effects. Poeple will make new friends, work in better companies, and perhaps have promising development in career. This is precious for ambitious youth, who set out from fawaway hometown to metropolitans to change their life. In fact when we are young and energic we all have to chanllenge ourselves and try to survive and thrive in bigger cities, where we have bigger chance to shine out and is also full of fierce competition.
Moving in search of another place has pros and cons, so does remaining in one place. When we living in one place for many years, we would defeinitely be familiar with all the customs and living styles that make our living in this place convenient and pleasant.Nevertheless, we also feel that our living lacks novelty, and we wish we could travel in holidays to other places so that we can have fresh experience about new places and cultures.
The issue about whether to stay in one place or move to another reflects one preference and future plans. In sum, it is beneficial for young people to move to another place where they can enjoy better future development, and since they are young and ambitious, they can easily adapat themselves to new surroundings, whereas for retired people, they should stay in one place so that they can enjoy a peaceful life and pleasant living customs.
第一次作业
Nowadays due to prosperous economy and the more convenience of the transportation，many people ，young people in particular，are tend to move from one place to another for the intention of decent job and considerable salary .whereas other people choose to live in one place from birth to death. Nevertheless, for me ,I would rather stay in one place instead of constantly move .The first thing I want to say is that long-time staying in one place make people get better understanding of the local culture and custom, thus live a life of ease and happiness. It takes many years for one to get accustomed to the living environment , and frequently change is hard to adapt oneself to the new different place. So please take serious consideration before one take actions to move ..
The other reason why I prefer to the former one is that the place in which people stay all the time have more friend than the place where freshly move. Entering into a new circumstance, one know little about the people all around , let alone make friends. Friends are indispensable part of our life, especially for those graduate ,freshly out of school without any work experience ,often feel depressed and frustrated under the drastic competition and endless pressure. It is beneficial to help them dissipate there misgivings in the hand of their friends. What if one move to another place without friends? One do feel solitary and helpless. So think twice when you going to move.
In a nutshell, staying in one place is of a preferred choice, since one is more familiar with the customs ,and one can seek help from more friends. Therefore, I strongly recommend living a stable life.
by sailing
In the old days, people usually stay in one place all their lives long. Nowadays, with the development of vehicles, people can move from place to place easily, so people can migrate. Some people like to spend their entire lives in one place, while others may prefer moving to look for a better job, house, community, or climate. As in my turn, I like to move regular. Because I think it can make an improvement of myself to move from one place to another.First, we can meet new people and we live in new circumstances when move to a new place. This is definitely true. When we move to a new place, almost everything is new, such as the way people live, the way people think, and the environment we live and work. For example, we may easily find people cook a dish in a different way. Then we can learn from them. Thereby, moving to a new place can help us to make our mind more open. Day by day, we will get improved.
Moreover, when we move to a new place, there will be more challenge for us to confront. Take the job thing for example. when we move to a new place, we will take new jobs. There will always be some thing we do not know. We must learn from the beginning. It’s very hard, but when we finish the stage, we will find that we have moved on.
And also, there will be more opportunities for us when we move to a new place. When there is a challenge, there will always be opportunities besides. When we move to a new place, we will meet new people and we will know new friends. And they may offer us new opportunities. This also can get us improved.
In conclusion, when we move several times throughout our lives, our lives will be rich and colorful, which are opportunities for us to improve ourselves. I like to move in search of another place. [font=Verdana][size=3]31. Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
Nowadays many people move around different place to find a better job because of cruel society. As for me, I like moving around because I like traveling, facing challenge and making my life better.
We are not living for money, but money is one important part in our life. Working in a big city can have more change to get a high salary job and more change to studying something new. Like the New York, most of best investment banks such as the JPMorgan are located in New York. As you see, moving to big city can have more change to get a high salary job.
I like challenging because my personality is very instable. Back to New York again, I like there because my dream is working in one of the best investment banks because the work there is full of challenges. You have to deal with some thing just happened because the economy market is very complex, you have to work even 16 hours because you have a lot task to do. I like this kind of life. So I want to move around like NY and Chicago and some other big city to find give me a chance to do this.
Moreover, I like traveling. I want to work in a place and get enough money to travel to get to know this place and then moving to another city and repeat like this again. I want my life filled with a lot of exciting experience. So far I have worked in a lot of places such as the Beijing, HK and Shanghai. I like this kind of life.
To sum up, moving to different places can help you find a better job and facing different challenges, at the same time it gives a change to some people like traveling like me. Thus, I prefer to move to different places.[/size][/font]
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[[i] 本帖最后由 zly901212 于 2008-6-22 21:07 编辑 [/i]] [size=12pt][font=Times New Roman]26次作业补交。。。那个谁要帮我改改呀[/font][/size]
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[size=12pt][font=Times New Roman]Some people prefer to stay in a place in their whole lives, while others would rather move from one place to another to look for better living conditions. If I have to choose between them, I would prefer to move in search of different places because a new place means more new friends, another opportunity and a new way to evaluate myself.[/font][/size]
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[size=12pt][font=Times New Roman]First of all, moving to a new place is actually a new start since nobody in this new place knows about me. Though leaving my old friends is tough, making new friends is exciting and I am always fond of making new friends. It is quite true that when I first arrive at a new place, I feel lonely and curious. So making new friends makes me a part of the new place and it makes me more familiar with the local customs and surroundings. Meanwhile, new friends can have different opinions referring to the same incidents, which will broaden my horizon of knowledge.[/font][/size]
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[size=12pt][font=Times New Roman]Secondly, there are always a variety of opportunities waiting for me in the new place. I can stick to my old habits, and also I can attempt new things. For example, I used to be a teacher, however, after I arriving at the new place, I can try to do some business instead. At the same time, it is quite possible that the old place which people have stayed for several years is quite noisy and uncomfortable to live in. So keeping moving from one to another offers the opportunity to find a better living condition to settle down eventually. Furthermore, one might not be welcomed in the old community, but in a new place, one can correct his bad habits and prevent from being disliked by other people. Therefore, moving to a new place provides opportunities for people to start a new life.[/font][/size]
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[size=12pt][font=Times New Roman]Finally, it is undeniable that there are more or less some culture differences between the old and new habitats, such as different foods, customs as well as beliefs. So I can have a better understanding about my old values and myself. Take me for example, I was born in a small village and my parents often required me to keep studying without developing my social abilities, such as
how to communicating efficiently with others, because we all thought studying is the only way to become successful in my village. However, after I attended university in a big city, I find that there were much more things to learn. Thanks to this moving to a big city, I finally find out what are my weaknesses and I can strengthen some abilities purposefully in order to become an available person.[/font][/size]
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[size=12pt][font=Times New Roman]Since I am young and can afford the risk of getting accustomed to a new place, I would prefer to move frequently to search for more friends, more opportunities and more ways to develop myself.[/font][/size]
[[i] 本帖最后由 凤舞九天0107 于 2008-6-23 19:16 编辑 [/i]]
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