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估计是UWaterloo录我的主要原因，因为我的分数比较烂（主科还不错） P?Hf6S3D刚才读了一遍，发现写的也挺烂的。。。运气好。。-.-
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[font=Arial][size=12pt]Since I was very young as a child, the world has been tempting me into exploring and discovering. I showed talent in learning and understanding complex logical & creative things, thus computer science is exactly the right field for me to fulfill my life in.[/size][/font]4v;Z:pv+y k"la
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[font=Arial][size=12pt]I chose computer science, or more specific, game developing, as my major because it is the one which enables me to create a world, explore infinite possibilities, and provide a chance for other people to adventure, bring them happiness (even development of intelligence as discovered recently). In addition, among other IT fields, game is the one combining art and technology into an unique exist, which I appreciate a lot. Game developing is inspired by creative thoughts, exquisite design and subtle minutia, while powered by adept programming skill and advanced technology.[/size][/font]
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[font=Arial][size=12pt]When I was in high school, I already made programming projects by self-learning, and got a chance to build a pretty big project with a cohesive group online, which brought me sense & experience of team-cooperation. However, soon a problem came that, with too much time devoted sitting in front of computers, I lost chance to get on well with other valuable things such as mastering interpersonal skills, enriching social life experience and enlarging my view, etc. As soon as I realized this, with the aim at developing versatile capabilities, a decision was made - which has been proved to be a wise choice - to lay aside programming for a while and take the time to gain other necessary abilities. After years of learning various kinds of skills, an athletic body is built, a much better communicating ability is also achieved. Besides those, I am now good at guitar, singing, basketball, soccer, pool, skiing, hip-hop dancing and so on.[/size][/font]f Nd U.}
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[font=Arial][size=12pt]Due to my eager for adventure, I’m always positive to chances of contacting new things. In other words, I’m keen on learning new conceptions. In 2003, a chance came that I could go to Australia. Thanks to that half a year living there, I saw a lot, contacted with different kinds of people from all over the world and improved myself from inside. “As much knowledge as you learn can make you get more of what you want.” At the time of university entrance, I chose Beijing to start my university life rather than staying in a place near my home, which brought me new perspective to see a different world. During that time, I enhanced my communicating skills by participating in lots of extracurricular activities, and played as the Director of Sound & Light Effect in a drama club.[/size][/font]
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[font=Arial][size=12pt]After came to Vancouver, I soon found part-time positions in Blenz Coffee and Safeway. By getting in the environment to contact people, I wish that I could get merged into this brand-new culture and society in the very soon future.[/size][/font]7s&NP#L;Z S5O
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[font=Arial][size=12pt]It is accepted to all that your school is the very best university, especially for computer related fields. There’s no doubt that the talented people in your university will give me the knowledge and help I desire. If the honor came that I could finally be accepted for the transfer, as well as devoting my effort to my study, I’m also eager to lead a vivid life in the beautiful campus. I just can’t wait to start a new life in this extremely new environment![/size][/font]
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[font=Arial][size=12pt]Roads are to be exploited, and goals are to be achieved.[/size][/font]
[font=Arial][size=12pt]Your favorable consideration of my application will be greatly appreciated.[/size][/font]
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[font=Arial][size=12pt]Sincerely,[/size][/font]
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[font=Arial][size=12pt]Here I append some prizes I achieved. Though awards cannot tell everything, they tell more than nothing.[/size][/font]
[font=Arial][size=12pt]2005 BUU Entrance Scholarship[/size][/font]
[font=Arial][size=12pt]2007 BUU English Oral Contest “Welcome to Beijing Olympics” 3rd Prize[/size][/font]-Ke8cYP"i S
[font=Arial][size=12pt]2007 National English Contest for College Students 1st Prize[/size][/font] d*ry-H3J9G
[font=Arial][size=12pt]2007 BUU Information College Scholarship[/size][/font]$Q3A~:] I%[ R3^ |
[font=Arial][size=12pt]2007 BUU Information College Monomial Superior Prize[/size][/font]"U)Vf W$~RJ-u_h
[font=Arial][size=12pt]2007 BUU President’s Special Prize[/size][/font]#GS s \8p?
[font=Arial][size=12pt]2007 National Scholarship[/size][/font]
[font=Arial][size=12pt](References available upon request)[/size][/font] 谢谢LZ分享 楼主真是大好人。
就是跟我专业不大对口::z5
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哈 我这个写得专业部分也不多 主要是自我介绍5j+rnXZ#bls加油 楼主谦虚了 滑铁卢。。。。。。。。::p7
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CS牛校啊。。。 谢谢LZ,看看先 楼主厉害呢 我成绩不好 被UVic拒了 理由就是最后7门课成绩不够80%（我是从国内转学到大二） ~ f1g,s Sql
但是被UBC,SFU,McMaster,UW录 估计就是ps的作用::16 q)M v'r T6J3?
写的时候 就是在国内大学上课无聊写一段 拼起来了 相当没有结构xDDD 好人 ::31 ::31 ::31 谢谢啦 好久没来太傻了，LZ真是写的很棒，我学到很多。 短小精悍啊！ 恭喜
thanks!
非常感谢！很有启发呢～ 你的经历还是很牛的，有内容可写啊 好帖！页:
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