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zhangbancao 发表于 2008-6-28 09:41

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Describe the person whom you'd love talking with often.Explain why you'd love talking with this person?what do you talk about?
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He is a professor in Beijing University.I think that he deserves the name of a great mentor.Here are two reasons.
Mp.h4bN First,my father is very sincere and sweet-tempered.When I chat with him,I feel comfortable.Once upon a time,I quarrelled with someone else bitter and was so sad.Only after my father's guidance,I was feeling a little better.+D"Q"hGaKP!wxi:G;W&eP
Second,my father is an excellent scholar full of wisdom.He knows a lot of what i don't know.He gives me various knowledges,so  every time talking with him,I do get progess and new idea about life.

zhangbancao 发表于 2008-6-29 10:39

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zhangbancao 发表于 2008-7-1 13:58

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rosalineluo 发表于 2008-7-1 17:41

个人觉得first,second略显生硬用
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for one reason,for another会比较好:loveliness: :loveliness:

zhangbancao 发表于 2008-7-3 15:42

谢LS赐教::16

zhangbancao 发表于 2008-7-3 15:46

Personally,my father is the person whom I'd love talking with often.
1w2O0?KHB(y He is a professor in Beijing University.I think that he deserves the name of a great mentor.Here are two reasons.
u3Gf;wRx#j For one reason,my father is very sincere and sweet-tempered.When I chat with him,I feel comfortable.Once upon a time,I quarrelled with someone else bitter and was so sad.Only after my father's guidance,I was feeling a little better.
aRzy8N#F@| For another reason,my father is an excellent scholar full of wisdom.He knows a lot of what i don't know.He gives me various knowledges,so  every time talking with him,I do get progess and new idea about life.

zhangbancao 发表于 2008-7-4 18:17

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zhangbancao 发表于 2008-7-4 18:58

Personally,my father is the person whom I'd love talking with often.
-sJ8g7b-u He is a professor in Beijing University.I think that he deserves the name of a great mentor.Here are two reasons.
l7X }3dU){ For one reason,my father is very sincere and sweet-tempered.When I chat with him,I always feel comfortable.Once upon a time,I quarrelled with someone else bitter and was so sad.Only after my father's guidance,I felt  a little better.
Eh!YdF.aU For another reason,my father is an excellent scholar full of wisdom.He knows a lot of what i don't know.He gives me various knowledges,so  every time talking with him,I do get progress and new idea about life.

zhangbancao 发表于 2008-7-6 15:14

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rosalineluo 发表于 2008-7-6 19:06

修改后要好些咯~~:loveliness:

zhangbancao 发表于 2008-7-7 15:22

谢谢LS::11

zhangbancao 发表于 2008-7-10 14:32

Personally,my father is the person whom I'd love talking with often.
}7@5FvV BF R He is a professor in Beijing University.I think that he deserves the name of a great mentor.Here are two reasons.
{*NVo+Z BB"X#RZ For one reason,my father is very kind and humorous.He often tells me a lot of interesting things which make me laugh and laugh.One day,I quarrelled with someone else bitter and was so sad.Only after my father's guidance,I was feeling a little better. s~;HL"i'T1DW(U:yI
For another reason,my father is an excellent scholar full of wisdom.He knows a lot of what i don't know.He gives me various knowledges,so  every time talking with him,I do get progess and new idea about life.

zhangbancao 发表于 2008-7-12 13:56

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zhangbancao 发表于 2008-7-14 17:49

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pooh1949 发表于 2008-7-19 16:48

北大是 peking university吧

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