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zhangbancao 发表于 2008-7-3 17:36

托福口语机经答案(二),请大家帮修改,谢谢

Describe a famous person you admire most.Explain why you admire this person.Include details and examples to support your response.)M:j2Q#U W
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He is the greatest basketball player of all time and I think any description of him inevitably fails to do justice to the man.Here are two reasons for why I admire him.
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C0Ov+o/qN For one reason,he is a phonmenal athlete with a unique combination of power,speed,and grace.I think he redefined the NBA superstar.As Magic Johnson put it,"There is Micheal Jordan,then there is the rest of us."'~t1p xHQNf-A @
For another reason,Michael Jordan is the most hard-working man in training.All his achievement,I think,resulted from his continued effort.Most of us,however, seldom pay attention to that,only noticing his honor in court.

zhangbancao 发表于 2008-7-4 18:18

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zhangbancao 发表于 2008-7-6 15:14

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zhangbancao 发表于 2008-7-6 17:55

Personally,the famous person I admire most is Michael Jordan of NBA.
N t9mM|/DV He is the greatest basketball player of all time and I think any description of him inevitably fails to do justice to the man.Here are two reasons for why I admire him.*K#\(pr2XF
For one reason,he is a phonmenal athlete with a unique combination of power,speed,and grace.I think he redefined the NBA superstar.As Magic Johnson put it,"There is Micheal Jordan,then there is the rest of us."
!|&f\nGX[H+t For another reason,Michael Jordan is the most hard-working man in training.All his achievements,I think,came from his continued effort.Most of us,however, seldom pay attention to that,only noticing his honor in basketball court.

rosalineluo 发表于 2008-7-6 19:05

觉得这句话“Most of us,however, seldom pay attention to that,only noticing his honor in court.”是不是太书面化了？一般口语貌似没有那样多的插入语呀。

zhangbancao 发表于 2008-7-7 15:28

把HOWEVER放句首会好些吗::z1

zhangbancao 发表于 2008-7-10 14:18

Personally,the famous person I admire most is Michael Jordan of NBA.
uu/Q*K$P(~j'?B[ He is the greatest basketball player of all time and I think any description of him inevitably fails to do justice to the man.Here are two reasons for why I admire him.
b3Mv&Y7C J#C x For one reason,he is a phonmenal athlete with a unique combination of power,speed,and grace.I think he redefined the NBA superstar.As Magic Johnson put it,"There is Micheal Jordan,then there is the rest of us."
h:k&B0Q1b;X/[3S For another reason,Michael Jordan is the most hard-working man in training.All his achievements,I think,came from his continued effort.However, Most of us,seldom pay attention to that,only noticing his honor in basketball court.

zhangbancao 发表于 2008-7-12 13:56

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zhangbancao 发表于 2008-7-14 17:49

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