贴考前作文，请帮忙参考要不要rescore
AW 3.56m`'? u2t_以下是考前写的issue和argue各一篇，考试的时候就是抽到issue的这一题，估计写得水平
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请大家看看，这样的作文3.5分，有没必要rescore，.v W6i H5h`dW
也算是给大家一个参考吧,3.5分的水平，我很弱，经常issue觉得无话可说8^3] ?l[ Fdyk
毕竟rescore需要挂着近两个月的时间.I/V#lCc q
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TOPIC: ISSUE51 - "Education will be truly effective only when it is5W7G\q5V)_
specifically designed to meet the individual needs and interests of each
student."
WORDS: 541 TIME: 0:45:00 DATE: 2008-3-3 L'|){s0e#ee8MD H0p
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Will education be truly effective only when it is specifically designed to B*?]7xw3V|
meet the individual needs and interests of each student? I agree with the
speaker's assertion in that needs and interests serve to be the best motive_-P ? ?EA JJE
of learning. However, this observation should not be unfairly extended to the f PYx afW&d'|
extreme extent that comprehensive education adopted currently is useless or ?0X_sD"LK0v
of no use.!N b8IJm#A1~"\4mk
Understandably, education, whose main purpose is to afford the studentsC)n C9_9pN
knowledge and ability to think and to learn, is more effective when arousing
the interests and being capable of satisfying certain needs of the students
--who serve as the chief factor determining the effects of teaching and
education when the manner and method on the respect of the teacher can be
assumed to be well developed as well as carried out. After all, the examination
results would be far more desirable for the educator, for the parents, and for[lq4y^z
the students themselves when there are subjective desires to absorb useful
knowledge and skills than the students are forced by seemingly oppressive
parents or scared by serious penalties from the teacher. Consider, for example,
the poor performance in the primary school of Albert Einstein, one of the
greatest scientists in the twentieth century. Not provided interests and needs,9k Fa.b-n
the education can impart few effects on enlightening the students, even the)TQ`z R*Nlux*@
genius with tremendous potentials. No one would argue that interests play an
important role in motivating students to learn and acquiring.
Thus, during the process of educating, schools must pay attention to leadingeF ?O)K j
student to discover their interests on the certain respects and adjusting the
subjects of teaching to improve the students' ability to apply the knowledgem+?2a;O{4m
and skills acquired--which can be used to fulfill certain needs. The mostDA6n U2{mi a4r k!b
beneficial method in the teach-and-learn relationship is to replace a whiteF;?5IY kcd
mind with an open one, which requires the teachers to render many contents and g{_(k.E V{#L
objectives for exploration and discoveries to the students. Thus, many schools
are setting many courses covering various fields of academic and application, RcBk|4s
not limited to dozens of boring books with antique data, words, and figures.y| C X-JV7X ]y
However, it is also impractical and imprudent to lend the obligation of
choosing the contents of learning to the students, many of which can not
understand really the content at all, when they have not master the knowledge gX SKs
and realize the necessity of learning needed for this decision of interests and%tq#}Ee A,Um N
need. Were primary students provided the opportunity to decide their learning,
baseball, computer game, or animation would be the major courses afforded inO B;Q:Wji5B
our schools.*{j Y*w:T5E ]V3H"t p:c
On the societal level, we cannot satisfy the diverse needs and interests ofa_ v&_,B6N
all individuals at the beginning phase of education, with limited resources.x%Nb,h!Sp"RgG
Admittedly, it is a waste of wealth to assign a teacher--even several
teachers--to each adolescent to fulfill the various interests. t*vY&PBm Q l K ]U#m
In final analysis, needs and interests are indeed the best teacher for our1V.c@W8k7tG6I
education, and thus our educator should not overlook the specialty of each
student. Yet, it is not effective and practical to design our educational
scheme to meet the individual needs and interests of each student, except who5cO:I _b G'CO
achieve the requirement for decision and judgment of interests and needs
--actually college students and graduates do.$e;R ob ?6o9Gv
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TOPIC: ARGUMENT20 - The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the
Balmer Island Gazette.
"The population of Balmer Island increases to 100,000 duing the summer months. uojq/s#X6\ t2@
To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the towne{4q x6h,rU1b
council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by each of]EV'T J
the island's six moped and bicycle rental companies from 50 per day to 30 per
day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town'B._4l*g Jky g*z^
council is sure to attain the 50 percent reduction in moped accidents that
was achieved last year in the neighboring island of Torseau, when Torseau's7OSc-L%b;o*h
town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals."7c&e4hC B pG,\Hy
WORDS: 450 TIME: 0:29:52 DATE: 2008-3-16 VkY5tJ1EpKy
The author recommend that Balmer limit the number of rented mopeds to reduce z^mf|V8o
the number accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians. However, the author has
rested on several suspicious assumptions which renders the conclution f.QqR+w&u'd
unconvincing.%g)T}4h8O s @ o
First, the author assume that the accidents in Balmer are mostly caused byF^O F)O4`9N5p
the excessive numbers of mopeds and bicycles. However, it is entirely possible6{u ?.t W2_
that other reasons account to the accidents, such as lacking of traffic
enducation to the riders or the pedestrains, poor weather conditions, or poor
road conditions. Without ruling out these possibility, the conculsion that they6Ry%a1`3tyU
limit of mopeds will reduce the number of accidents is not convincing.
Sencondly, even if the accidents are attributable to the number of bicycles,
the rented bicycles of the island's six companies possibly cannot mostly
account for the excessive number of bicycles in Balmer. Perhaps a large amount@ x5|z G/_a
of the residents in Balmer hold their own bicycles or mopeds. Or perhaps the b}Q]U,]]
bicycles are rented from companes other than these six local companies. If any
of these is the case, the limit of rentals in the six companies would fail to
be effective in the reduction of accidents..zx4bK;qG
Thirdly, even if it is the excessive rentals of the six companies results in
the accidents, just because there are an increase of population in the summer N `m,`/Vc Q:Su
months there, it is unconvincing that the limit which is enforced with in the
summer season is sufficient to prevent the accidents. Perhaps there far fewer
accidents in summer season than in other season, due to certain weather&wNx Rw&\3zn
conditions.
Fourthly, the author's conclusin further rests on the assumption that it is
the limiting of rentals that result in the reduction of accidents in Torseau,[-f6|7B5OS)v(Vy
and that the experience of Torseau's town is applicable and effecitve for,T l,M`'J
Balmer. Without ruling out other possibilities for the reduction of accidents
in Torseau, the author's assumption the limiting of rentals is effective in)u6Lx mk z#e1B
Torseaus is not reliable. Perhpas last year Torseau has also improved the roadD+M sH%Wv gI#[
Fourthly, the author's conclusin further rests on the assumption that it isO E,i4d6n @E2N z xI
the limiting of rentals that result in the reduction of accidents in Torseau,7V [!o%C#Cc2s+lI3\G
and that the experience of Torseau's town is applicable and effecitve for
Balmer. Without ruling out other possibilities for the reduction of accidents
in Torseau, the author's assumption the limiting of rentals is effective in
Torseaus is not reliable. Perhpas last year Torseau has also improved the road(@:[VOq
conditions there, or build new road area to separate pedestrians and mopeds.
Even if the limiting in Torseau is useful to reducce moped accident, the
limiting unnecessaily serve to effectively reduce the accidents in Balmer. Theb#@@ h+Xn {
author fails to provide the investigation of the cause of accidents in Balmer
as well as those in Torseau. Perhaps the main cause of moped accidents in
Balmer is largely different from that in Torseau. Without ruling out these o.D9I#M.J&`!L
possibilities, the conclusion that limiting of rentals would be able to
attain the 50 percent reduction in moped accidents is unconvincing.
In sum, without sufficient investigation and information about the situation,J%h2Ah3c K LD
the author's conclusion which stands on several dubious assumption is
unconvincing to me.
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