询问贴【组建新的梯队吗】
最近出现了落单的孤鹰大家是否会希望组建新的梯队？ 好啊,版主!正期待呢! 支持 有人组织的话，我也加入。暑期正想训练 如果有的话，算我一个 4个人了，再来2个。 nobody response? If I have a chance ,I want to join in this groupe
Now I am parparing for the IBT which is held on 8.3 in beijing any chance to join this gruop? I am preparing for IBT on 8 August, in Beijing. feel free to cnotact me by msn : [email=hh1936@163]hh1936@163[/email].com OK, IT'S TIME.
now we have six people , it's enough for a team.
who's willing to be the team leader?
Being a team leader means responsibility, enthusiasm.
回复 10# benz2015 的帖子
I will be very glad if you are the leader ,In my person point of view ,this is a good chance of regrouping NO.2 of lanying .If this is true ,I will insist on writing and modifing article for a long time .
look forward to you count me in 请问可以算我一个吗？
我也想加入，快考了 可以再加一个我吗？？？？？也是准备2试中。第一次就是因为作文被卡了！！痛心疾首中。。希望可以~~~~ 也可以算我一个，我也想练练 如果弄好了请leader建个群，加我qq：65278554 [quote]原帖由 [i]FFFMZJB[/i] 于 2008-7-17 11:42 发表 [url=http://e.taisha.org/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=12157560&ptid=1085728][img]http://e.taisha.org/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]
I will be very glad if you are the leader ,In my person point of view ,this is a good chance of regrouping NO.2 of lanying .
If this is true ,I will insist on writing and modifing article for a lon ... [/quote]
这个时代需要领导者！
FFFMZJB, now you are the captain of this new team. 蓝鹰第18梯队
请把你的自定义头衔改为 蓝鹰第18梯队Cap
请通知其他队员将自定义头衔改为 Blue Eagle T18
good luck! 组建好你的梯队，和 tostudyinusa 比一比，can you be better than him?
在季度末会有机会给你申请蓝鹰优秀队长的勋章！
Jimmy 好，终于有回应了
什么时候能开始呢？ 我in了吗？？？？？ ::z1 我也想参加~最近开始复习作文了，想找人互改，可以加我吗？
我下月考 加我吧
QQ94047902 小队长小队长，快快出现！Team18 第一次作业
不如这样吧，求人不如求己，等人不如自己来。大家想组队都是希望有动力共同进步。
那就在这里组队吧，队长既然没空，我们就先自己来。
因为没有获得允许创建新的帖子，就暂时在这里跟帖，帖上文章就好。
今天19号，抽185的#19
[size=4][color=red]TEAM 18 第一次作业[/color][/size]
[size=4][color=red]Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways, or should governments spend more money on improving public transpotation(buses, trains, subways)? Why? [/color][/size]
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[size=2]按照楼层顺序，第一个和第二个交的互改，第三个与第四个互改，类推。当然，其他同学也可以改。[/size]
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::81 ::81 加油！ [size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]There is a controversial issue about whether the government should spend money on improving roads or public transportation. According to my personality and experiences, I prefer to invest money to construct roads. In the following paragraphs I will provide concrete evidences to explain my position clearly.[/font][/size]
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[size=15pt][font=Times New Roman]For one thing, it is universally acknowledged that building roads could improve our city’s current situation such as construct new road for transport, rebuild and widen the old road in order to reduce the pressure from population and cars growth. In my country, there are increasing number of people have private car or plan to possess although the gas price are continue increasing. Clearly, compare to change the public transportations, building roads are of important to the government. Also, there are few traffic jams when the new roads have been built and few traffic accidents occurred because of the road is narrow or not flat which condition may effects the drivers’ status, especially when they are very anxiety or anger. In terms of this situation, our government is better to invest money to improve the road condition. [/font][/size]
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[size=15pt][font=Times New Roman]For another thing, although improving current situation is the most important determine, it is not the only explanation for government pays money to the roads, so it is no exaggerating to say that it also can be regard as a line to link the city and countryside. With modern highways residents can easily take a break to expose to fresh air in countryside, and enjoy the refresh vegetables and seafood which transport from the various areas, even different countries. It is undoubtedly right that the roads play a significant role in our life.[/font][/size]
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[font=Times New Roman][size=15pt]Aside from the points above, I am fully convinced that spend money to public transportations also has some advantages like there are more buses can be supply to the consumers, the advanced equipment may improve the condition of the bus, and the consumers can receive some new services. [/size][size=14pt]Admittedly, improving roads has its undeniable demerits. For instance, investment is huge and the new road need long time to build. However, the advantages of improving roads carry more weight than those of investing transportations. The case is rare and too weak to weaken my point.[/size][/font]
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[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]From what has been discussed above, we can safely reach the conclusion that the government pay more money to improve roads may bring more benefits and rewards.[/font][/size]
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[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]不会写，语法不好，大家帮忙给我看看[/font][/size]
[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]IBT文章经常不会论点扩展。。很郁闷。。。[/font][/size] 先占座，今天过来才发现组织起来了，明天把19写好了，发上来！
赞版主和楼上楼上“第一个吃螃蟹"的美女，::80佩服::83 你们谁建个群。。。我今晚写 楼上的楼上的楼上，我跟你互改
因为是第一次，你看就好。
我真的，很怕。。。
写到最后快崩溃了。
Anyway. 谢啦~ lucky LJ还没加入群么？外面有个帖子~~ [size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]Team 18
7.21
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[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]There is a controversial issue about whether the government should spend money on improving roads or public transportation. According to my [i]personality[/i] (? Not apropriate) and experiences, I prefer to invest money to construct roads. In the following paragraphs I will provide concrete evidences to explain my position clearly.
For one thing, [u]it is universally acknowledged that[/u] building roads could improve our city’s current situation such as construct new road for transport, rebuild and widen the old road in order to reduce the pressure from population and cars growth. In my country, [i]there are increasing number of people have private car[/i] ([color=red]there is an increasing number of people who already have private cars[/color]) or plan to possess[color=red],[/color] ([/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]断一下[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]) although the gas price [i]are[/i] ([/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]可以删掉，[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]continue[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]是及物动词[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]) continue[color=red]s [/color]increasing. Clearly, compare to [i]change[/i] ([color=red]changing[/color]) the public transportations, building roads [i]are[/i] [color=red](is[/color]) of [color=red]more[/color] ([/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]突出对比[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]) important to the government. [Also, there are few traffic jams when the new roads have been built and few traffic accidents occurred because of the road is narrow or not flat which condition may effects the drivers’ status, especially when they are very anxiety or anger.] In terms of this situation, our government is better to invest money to improve the road condition. [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]（这个句子[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman][ ][/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]过于冗长，意思表达不清晰，改后如下）[/size][/font][size=14pt][/size]
[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]Also, there will be fewer traffic jams if the new roads are constructed to meet the need of expansing transpotation. And at the some process, as the drivers will no longer be borthered by anxiety or irritation, which are caused by the unsatisfied narrow road and rough surface, the number of traffic accidents will largely decrease.[/font][/size]
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[size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]For another [i]thing[/i] ([/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]可省略，因为搭配一般是[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]for one thing, for another), although improving current situation[color=red]s[/color] is [i]the most important determine [/i]([color=red]indeed crucial[/color],[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]这样表达清晰些，简洁些[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]), it is not the only explanation for government [color=red]to[/color][i] pay money to the roads[/i] (support the road-construction). ([/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]上面一句可以结束了。[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]) ([color=red]For another reason is that[/color]) ([/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]应该先解释上句：‘为什么不是唯一的原因’[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]) [i]it is not exaggerating to say that[/i] [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]（[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]without exaggeration,[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]）[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman] [i]it[/i]
[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]（[/size][/font][font=Times New Roman][size=14pt]the improvement of road and highways[/size][size=14pt]. [/size][/font][font=宋体][size=14pt]有点指代不清）[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]also can be regard[color=red]ed [/color]as a [i]line[/i] [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]（[/size][/font][font=Times New Roman][size=14pt]benefit[/size]
[/font][font=宋体][size=14pt]你看看这样改会不会让意思顺畅一些？）[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]to link city and countryside. [i]With[/i][/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]（[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]Because of the advancement of[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]）[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]modern highways,residents can easily [u]take a break to expose to fresh air in countryside[/u],[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]（可以有更好的表达方法，一时想不到[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]…[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]）[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman] and enjoy the [i]refresh[/i] (refresh[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]是动词，直接用[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]fresh[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]就可以了，跟前面一个重复应该没关系，做个对应[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]) vegetables and seafood which [color=red]are[/color] transport[color=red]ed[/color] from various areas, even [i]different countries [/i](from abroad). It is undoubtedly [i]right[/i] ([/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]有点多余[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]) that the roads play a significant role in our lives.
Aside from the points above, I am fully convinced that spend[color=red]ing[/color] money to public transportations also has some advantages[color=red].[/color] ([/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]两句断开比较好[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman])
There are,[color=red] for example,[/color] more [i]buses can be supply[/i] [/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]（[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman]buses available[/font][/size][font=宋体][size=14pt]）[/size][/font][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman] to consumers; the advanced equipment may improve the condition of the bus[color=red]es[/color], and the consumers can receive some [i]new[/i] ([color=red]higher[/color]) services. [u]Admittedly[/u], improving roads has [u]its undeniable demerits[/u]. For instance, investment is huge and the new road[color=red]s[/color] need long time to [color=red]be[/color] builded. However, [u]the advantages of improving roads carry more weight than those of investing transportations.[/u] [i]The case is rare and too weak to weaken my point.([/i][/font][/size][i][font=宋体][size=14pt]表意不清晰[/size][/font][/i][i][size=14pt][font=Times New Roman])[/font][/size][/i]
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[font=Times New Roman]From what has (have) been discussed above, we can safely reach the conclusion that the government pay[color=red]ing[/color] more money to improve roads may bring more benefits and rewards.[/font][/size]
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[size=14pt][font=宋体]最后有一些总结，天魔同学在附件看吧[/font][/size]
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[size=14pt][font=宋体]Q群。。。百年上一次Q//////[/font][/size] 现在还可以加入吗？
回复 30# mediterraneam 的帖子
of coures ,anytime ,welcome ,come on我参加
我也想参加。 弱弱滴报个名……回复 33# taodaiqin 的帖子
OK，加入我们的NO.18吧，要按时完成写和修改的任务啊 我也想加入，怎么加入呢？页:
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