求思路
[font=宋体][size=10.5pt]8[/size][/font][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]月17日[/size][/font][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]The advice you take from the friends who are older than you is valuable than that taken form the friends at your age[/size][/font][font=宋体][size=10.5pt][font=宋体][size=10.5pt]A multitude of experience plays a significant role on one’s success. However,some celebrities who are proficient in certain kind of specific field gain an international renown when they are very young. Most reasons account for this kind of cases base on the fact that they gain a myriad of useful advice and experience from some sagacious elder friends. Therefore, I could not help but believe that suggestions from friends who are older are of more value than those from peer’s.[/size][/font]
[font=宋体][size=10.5pt]写了个开头就写不下去了，大家帮忙想想~~[/size][/font]
[/size][/font] anybody can help her? 大家帮帮忙吧 第一段写得不错啊
一个点可以写自己的经历啊。对比与自己年龄、思路相仿的peers和older friends的advice
另一个点可以写一个名人的轶事。你自己在第一段里面也提到了celebrities啊 好的，谢谢了
可是有哪些名人的例子呢？？ I dont understand why you keep thinking you should write something about celebrities while you even dont know how to get started?
Why dont you just pick some easier approach such as writing your pa.
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