第一次作文，求各位狠拍！
ＧＲＥ作文被打击了，所以现在准备ＩＢＴ作文请各位拍一下，这是写的第一篇，大家不要客气[size=12pt][font=Calibri]5. A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.[/font][/size]
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[size=12pt][font=Calibri]Do we need the factory in our community? A company announced the plan for a factory construction; therefore it needs the discussion. Obviously the advantages the factory can bring to the community: profits, job employments, convenient transportation and so forth. Nevertheless, in my opinion the disadvantages should be more considerable to the advantages such as the pollutions made by the factory and the extra expanses for potential risks.[/font][/size]
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[size=12pt][font=Calibri]Admittedly, to build a large factory is surely to generate some positive results. For instance, the first thing comes to mind is the profits we could get. Building a factory may make out goods for sell which can earns a lot of money and attract more investment to the community, as a result we can led a better life. Besides, the job opportunity would increase, so the employment rate in the community would improve.[/font][/size]
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[size=12pt][font=Calibri]However, we can not erase the negative aspects behind the benefits. Facing a more serious environment situation makes we must think about the affect the factory would made to environment. Since the factory is large and near our community, it inevitably make the water pollution which can damage our agriculture system; the noise pollution would not only upset us when we awake but also have a disturbance when we are sleep; what is more, it can bring the waste air which is bad for our lung and the dust obstacle our breathing and so on.[/font][/size]
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[size=12pt][font=Calibri]There are also some things that have potential dangers to us. For examples, it is true that the transportation would be better after the construction, yet it is more possible the number of cars would be also soaring which come up with the improved transportation system and therefore the situation would be more crowded. Also, we have no confidential evidence to justify that the factory must be profitable, therefore it can not make the conclusion that we will be benefited. What is more, the community would probably spend more additional money for the destruction of the environment, for that matter, we would rather lose more.[/font][/size]
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[size=12pt][font=Calibri]As discussed above, although it sounds pretty good for the building plan, I disagree with the proposal for the environment and ecology crisis, and the obscured negative effects. We should make a careful and thoughtful consideration.[/font][/size]
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[size=12pt][font=Calibri]已经被我处理和润色过了。。。[/font][/size]
[[i] 本帖最后由 zhangxin511 于 2008-7-22 23:00 编辑 [/i]] 没人理我，自己顶一下
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