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剑桥雅思四的作文：论幸福Write about the following topic:
Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Happiness
Everyone hopes to get happiness, but many of us don’t know whether they are happy or not. Happiness is such a wonderful thing that it is indispensable to our everyday lives; on the contrary, we can’t exactly express what happiness is. Therefore, it is very important for us to ask how to define happiness and how to be happy.
It is undeniable that to say what is happiness is quite a complicated problem for all of us. Happiness is a kind of spiritual substance and can’t be recognized directly, unlike those material things such as money and places, which are easy to appreciate and acquire. Moreover, happiness, like sadness and disappointment, is one kind of our emotional feelings. There are different types of happiness to different people, and to particular person, one’s sense of happy will change according to the development of circumstances and conditions.
Happiness is an indispensable thing to us. To our ordinary people, what we suppose to do to acquire the sense of happiness? In my opinion, two aspects of things are very crucial. First, we should try our best to know ourselves. The more we understand what are most important to ourselves, the easier for us to live a happy life. Second, we should learn to be sociable. If we actively take part in various social activities and experience diverse ways of living, we will deeply appreciate the world’s beauty and how colorful it is, which is useful for us to find happiness.
In conclusion, to be happy is an important thing for us and we all deserve to get happiness. We must obtain more knowledge about both our own lives and the outside world, so that we could eventually know what happiness is.
[[i] 本帖最后由 lianzi1981 于 2008-7-23 22:09 编辑 [/i]] I hope you someone can help you. Happiness
Everyone hopes to get happiness[color=blue]（感觉有点中式，everyone hopes to be happy就好了）,[/color] but many of us don’t know whether they are happy or not. Happiness is such a wonderful thing that it is indispensable to our everyday lives; on the contrary, we can’t exactly express what happiness is. Therefore, it is very important for us to ask how to define happiness and how to be happy. [color=blue]（‘我们不能表达什么是幸福’ 和 ‘定义幸福是什么’ 有什么关系？）
[/color]It is undeniable that [color=red]to say（why you write "to say" here?）[/color] what is happiness is quite a complicated [color=red]problem(question)[/color] for all of us. Happiness is a kind of spiritual substance and can’t be recognized directly, unlike those material things such as money and places, which are easy to appreciate and acquire. Moreover, happiness, like sadness and disappointment, is one kind of our emotional feelings. [color=blue]There are different types of happiness to different people[/color],([color=blue]既然你都没定义什么是happiness, 为什么说different types of happiness.)[/color] and to particular person, one’s sense of happy will change according to the [color=blue]development(development 修饰 circumstances &conditions? 似乎不好，我问问再答复你) [/color]of circumstances and conditions.
Happiness is an indispensable thing to us. To our ordinary people, what we suppose to do to acquire the sense of happiness? In my opinion, two aspects of things are very crucial. First, we should try our best to know ourselves. The more we understand what are most important to ourselves, the easier for us to live a happy life. Second, we should learn to be sociable. If we actively take part in various social activities and experience diverse ways of living, we will deeply appreciate the world’s beauty and how colorful it is, which is useful for us to find happiness.
In conclusion, to be happy is an important thing for us and we all deserve to get happiness. We must obtain more knowledge about both our own lives and the outside world, so that we could eventually know what happiness is.
[b][size=2]NOTE:以前我考的时候，完全没有关注过剑4的这篇文章， 这个题目真的有点科幻。。。。[/size][/b]
[b][size=2]我也不知道这种东西怎么写::21 [/size][/b]
[b][size=2]你看看范文[/size][/b]
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