求拍！17号考试的第二次独立写作练习，死马当活马医了
上高中的懒人……时间总是太紧张了……是否同意college years are the best time of one's life
When it comes to the best time in one's life, college years may be a expected answer. One is no longer a child who is at the mercy of one's parents in college, and it's not yet for him or her to take up the responsibility of family and the society either. But doubt may till be expressed, is there really such thing as the best time in one's life?
I feel with my heart that I'm not with the idea that college years enjoy this distinctive perfectness. The initial reason was that there is never an appropriate time in one's life to judge which period of his or her life was the best. Things have changed since the past time passed, and things will continuously change in the future. When people are feeling down and look back to what they have went through, everything etched in their memory will be absolutely beatified and it is much likely that college years stands out to be regard as the best due to their longing for the return of their youth, neglecting the pain of studying hard and the stress of being overload which no one wants to experience again. While for those who have not graduated yet, it won't be proper to decide that right now is their best year, for there is a sky of uncertainty waiting for them, no one can tell whether there will be some time few years later when they again determine that they are enjoying the best time of their life.
In addition, to judge whether the years are good or not need to put into consideration a great deal of factors. What opportunities they run into and what accomplishment they make in the certain time will both influence the people's evaluation of the time. And what happens in college is not the same to everyone. In fact, college years are not even there for everyone.
Make the most of every day, and every year is the best year.
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When it came to the best time of one's life, college yearsmay be an expected answer. One is no longer a child who is
at the mercy of one's parents in college, and it's not yet
for him or her to take up the responsibility of family and
the society either. But doubt may till be expressed, is
there really such one thing as the best time of one's
life?
I feel in my heart that I'm not with the idea that college
years enjoy this distinctive perfectness. The initial
reason was that there is never an appropriate time in
one's life to judge which period of his or her life was
the best. Things have changed as time passed, and things
will continuously change in the future. When people are
feeling down and look back to what they have went through,
everything etched in their memory will be absolutely
beatified and it is much likely that college years stands
out to be regard as the best due to their longing for the
return of their youth, neglecting the pain of studying
hard and the stress of being overload which no one wants
to experience again. While for those who have not
graduated yet, it won't be proper to decide whether the
right time is their best year, for there is a sky of
uncertainty waiting for them, no one can tell whether
there will be some time few years later when they again
determine that they are enjoying the best time of their
life.
In addition, to judge whether the years are good or not
need to put into consideration a great deal of factors.
What opportunities they run into and what accomplishment
they make during the certain time will both affect
people's evaluation. And what happens in college is not
the same to everyone. In fact, college years are not even
normal experienced by everyone.
Make the most of every day, and every year is the best
year.
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