请教GWD 1-Q34
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[size=5][font=Times New Roman]people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their[/font]（前后不可比，前面是[font=Times New Roman]people ([color=red]抑或是rate？),[/color][/font]后面是[font=Times New Roman]USA,[/font]） [/size]
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[font=Times New Roman][size=5]people in France and the United States consume fatty foods at about the same rate, the 网上说这个是答案[/size][/font]
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[font=Times New Roman][size=5]fatty foods are consumed by people in France at a comparable rate to the United States’s, their[/size][/font]
[size=5][color=red]如果A里比较的前者是rate，那么这题比较的前面也是rate，而后面是[font=Times New Roman]the United States’s (省略了rate)，这么说前后比较的对象是一致的呀[/font][/color][/size]
[font=Times New Roman][size=5][color=red]那么这个选项的错误是their指代不明么？我觉得这点没问题啊，因为their后面不是有in France么（未划线部分）[/color][/size][/font]
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[size=5][font=Times New Roman]the rate of fatty foods consumed in France and the United States is about the same, the[/font][color=red]（有什么错误啊？）[/color][/size]
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[size=5]the rate of people consuming fatty foods is about the same in France and the United States, the(显然把原意改变了)[/size] [color=DarkGreen]Although [u]people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their[/u] death rates from heart disease are far lower in France.
A. people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their（前后不可比，前面是people [color=Red](抑或是rate？)[/color],后面是USA,）[/color]
比的是 rate。
[color=DarkGreen]B. people in France and the United States consume fatty foods at about the same rate, the 网上说这个是答案
C. fatty foods are consumed by people in France at a comparable rate to the United States’s, their[/color]
[color=Red]如果A里比较的前者是rate，那么这题比较的前面也是rate，而后面是the United States’s (省略了rate)，这么说前后比较的对象是一致的呀
那么这个选项的错误是their指代不明么？我觉得这点没问题啊，因为their后面不是有in France么（未划线部分）[/color]
C 是写得很拖泥带水的。前面并没有什么 XX's rate 这样的结构，后面却来个 United States's，十分刺耳。那个 their 这样读下去时，确是不知所指，直到最后才有个法国冒出来。
[color=DarkGreen]D. the rate of fatty foods consumed in France and the United States is about the same, the[/color][color=Red]（有什么错误啊？）[/color]
这里错是错在 the death rate 前面没有交代，不知道是谁的 death rate，因为前面没有说人。
[color=DarkGreen]E. the rate of people consuming fatty foods is about the same in France and the United States, the[/color] [color=Red](显然把原意改变了)[/color]
没有所谓原意的。E 错是因为 the rate of people consuming fatty foods 表达得不正确，不知道是什么的 rate。 d选项里 如果要明确指代应该怎么改啊？ D 修不好的了。要改就要在前面加 people 之类，那就变成 B 的样子了。
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