蓝鹰计划(Lanyine)-IBT 4月写作集合令！第一周。（3.18-3.25）
[font=微软雅黑][size=5][color=blue]4月份要进考场的同学赶快来一起练作文！[/color][/size][/font][font=微软雅黑][size=5][/size][/font]
[font=微软雅黑][size=5][color=red]1.每周一次的训练（最好每篇作文写三遍，改三遍，大概就一周的时间）[/color][/size][/font]
[font=微软雅黑][size=5][color=red]2.作文来自机经[/color][/size][/font]
[font=微软雅黑][size=5][color=red]3.发帖要求[/color][/size][/font]
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[font=微软雅黑][size=5] 首先，[color=sandybrown]对作文的思路，打算怎么写[/color][/size][/font]
[font=微软雅黑][size=5] 其次，[color=mediumturquoise]你打算写出什么漂亮的句子[/color][/size][/font]
[font=微软雅黑][size=5] 最后，[color=blue]发上你的整篇作文[/color][/size][/font]
[font=微软雅黑][size=5][color=plum]发帖子前，请确认你已经用word检查过一般的语法错误[/color][/size][/font]
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[font=微软雅黑][size=5]每星期一次[/size][/font]
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[font=微软雅黑][size=5]本周练习[/size][/font]
[font=微软雅黑][size=5]Do you agree or disagree?[/size][/font]
[font=微软雅黑][size=5]Teachers should assign homework for student everyday？[/size][/font]
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[[i] 本帖最后由 benz2015 于 2010-3-18 10:24 编辑 [/i]]
沙发~
[size=4]我来抛砖引玉吧。。大家使劲拍。。我心理素质可好了。。呵呵 ::z5态度：完全反对
1 作业已成为学生课后的一项重大负担，不利于他们的身心健康发展
2不利于学生自学能力的培养，形成一种“填鸭式的学习方式” 不利用学生其他方面能力的培养。
3而且很多作业都是简单机械的重复， 每天都要完成容易造成学生的厌学情绪。
因为很多作业很可能学生已经会做，但是有一些不会做的却没有被布置。
打算用到的好句子:
Vital as……
according to a survey headed by……
by no means can ……
only in this way can ……
正文：
[b][font=Georgia][size=5][code]Vital as the development of student, nobody could afford to notice the phenomenon that homework has occupied tons of students’ leisure time. The topic that whether teachers should assign homework for student everyday has been heatedly discussed. Somebody claims that homework is pretty good for students, including some specialists, however, as for me, I prefer to in favor of the latter one. My reasons are as follows.
There is no denying that an increasing number of students have been fairly tired due to infinite homework, according to a survey headed by 21 century, 78% students treat homework as nothing but a big burden. Looking around our society, many students even in the primary school have to do so much homework that they lose their right to play outside, not to mention the students in high school or middle school, it is common to see a majority of them can’t go to bed until 1:00a.m which is harmful to their physical and psychological development.
Moreover, when fulfilling the assignment has became a goal for students, the education would become a useless spoon-feed education which has no use for students’ development and cultivate a crowed of examination machine as well. In fact, our society needs this kind of people who are not only good at studying but also have other skills such as communicating with others, singing, dancing so on and so forth. To this point, if teachers always assigned so much homework, in no way can students have time to boost their other abilities.
The last but not the least, a large number of homework assigned by teachers are simply simple repeat, there is no need for students to do them again and again, besides, it is quite possible that students can do the homework that assigned by teachers while they still have their problem. Under this circumstance, many of them have to spend much time on the homework but solving the problem of their owns as well as they don’t have much time to think on their own.
To sum up, the drawbacks of homework are overwhelmingly obvious, not to mention fulfill them everyday. In my point of view, the school, educator and teacher should think out a more fitful strategy for students. Only in this way can they get a higher stage.[/code][/size][/font][/b][/size]
[[i] 本帖最后由 咸鱼大翻身 于 2010-3-19 16:52 编辑 [/i]] 关注 Vital as the development of student, nobody could afford to notice the phenomenon that homework has occupied tons of students’ leisure time. The topic that whether teachers should assign homework for student everyday has been heatedly discussed. Somebody claims that homework is pretty good for students, including some specialists, [u]however, as for me, I prefer to in favor of the latter one. My reasons are as follows.[/u]
查查prefer的用法
There is no denying that an increasing number of students have been fairly tired due to[u] infinite homework[/u], according to a survey headed by 21 century, [u]78% students treat homework as nothing but a big burden[/u]. Looking around our society, many students even in the primary school have to do so much homework that they [u]lose their right to play outside[/u], not to mention the students in high school or middle school[u], it is common to see a majority of them can’t go to bed until 1:00a.m[/u] which is harmful to their physical and psychological development.
查查Infinite的用法
nothing but a big burden 有点过了吧？
是lose their time还是没有时间？
句式再改改
Moreover, when [color=red][u]fulfilling [/u][/color]the assignment has became a goal for students, the education would become a useless spoon-feed education which has no use for students’ development and cultivate a crowed of examination machine as well. [u]In fact, our society needs this kind of people who are not only good at studying [/u]but also have other skills such as communicating with others, singing, dancing so on and so forth. To this point, if teachers always assigned so much homework, in no way can students have time to boost their other abilities.
查查fulfill的用法
在这里说good at study 不合时宜，因为你后面说到的技能也是要学习的
The last but not the least, a large number of homework assigned by teachers are simply [u]simple repeat,[/u] there is no need for students to [u]do them again and again[/u], besides, it is quite possible that students can do the homework that assigned by teachers while they still have their problem. Under this circumstance, many of them have to spend much time on the homework but solving the problem of their owns as well as they don’t have much time to think on their own.
To sum up, the drawbacks of homework are overwhelmingly obvious, not to mention fulfill them everyday. In my point of view, the school, educator and teacher should think out a more fitful strategy for students. Only in this way can they get a higher stage.
模板的痕迹啊~明显
加油，改改
回复 4# benz2015 的帖子
谢谢几米哥帮我改啦。。我也觉得自己特别喜欢用模板。。每次考试都是那一套。。::z8 好像不用就心里慌怕自己写不完一样::18
而且有时候还以为模板特漂亮呢 额~~ 现在想想我要是rater 天天看这种千篇一律的东西肯定也是要抓狂了。。
请教一下。。不知道怎么才能丢开模板的束缚呢？
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