出国文书精义(个人总结)
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[size=3][font=宋体]三个重要点[/font][font=Times New Roman]:[/font][font=宋体]个性化[/font][font=Times New Roman] [/font][font=宋体]事例胜于雄辩[/font][font=Times New Roman] [/font][font=宋体]要出去的个人理由[/font][/size]G&h#~(w0b _p%Sx
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[font=宋体][size=3]写作的目的就是要给对方留下深刻而正面的印象[/size][/font]
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[size=3][font=宋体]简历框架式[/font][font=Times New Roman],[/font][font=宋体]侧重简洁[/font][font=Times New Roman],[/font][font=宋体]全面[/font][font=Times New Roman];[/font][font=宋体]个人陈述[/font][font=Times New Roman],[/font][font=宋体]侧重个性细节[/font][font=Times New Roman].[/font][/size]
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[size=3][font=宋体]简历的语言一定要简洁[/font][font=Times New Roman],[/font][font=宋体]准确[/font][font=Times New Roman],[/font][font=宋体]层次分明[/font][font=Times New Roman].[/font][/size]'m1h(d W7u/Xs9a#N
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[size=3][font=宋体]另外附上我的PS模版在下一楼[/font][/size] [align=center][align=center][b][size=18pt]Personal Statement[/size][/b][/align][/align][size=3][color=black]Chemistry is my initially misunderstood but rightly chosen major. I first became interested in chemistry in senior high school. Ironically, the reason was that I considered it as an easy and simple subject. Just by memorizing some pieces of fundamental principles and reaction equations, I could easily gain good marks in exams. It was so “easy” to me that I chose this “simple” subject as my undergraduate major. My undergraduate experiences, however, proved that I was wrong. Chemistry, indeed, is a really complicated scientific discipline with a vast range of profound knowledge. At first, facing so much elusive content form various aspects of chemistry, I felt a little regretful for my former decision. However, the more I learn and the deeper I drill[/color][color=black][font=宋体]，[/font][/color][color=black]the more interesting and fascinating I find it. Especially, after three years’ theory studying and nearly two years’ research in the lab, I believe that taking chemistry as my major is definitely a right choice. Gradually falling in love with chemistry, I have taken special interest in material, the interdisciplinary field of Chemistry, Physics and Engineering. From my perspective, chemistry is not what it was one or two hundred years ago. Modern chemistry emphasizes more on multi-subject cooperation and application. Material chemistry is a result of this trend. Basing on fundamental knowledge of chemistry, material chemists design and synthesize special functional materials to meet certain needs in industry and people’s daily life. This is a magic and challenging field, to which I am keen to devote myself. [/color][/size]5u V"y1p^ MBVy
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[size=3][color=black]During my two years’ research in the lab, I mainly assist my tutor to create materials used for electrodes of lithium battery. Our group do all the steps from designing target materials to choosing proper paths to synthesizing them, and then we would test and analyse the products. The final results may lead to a new research cycle. I have anticipated in all the steps, and learnt a lot from these experiences. My innovation spirit and creativity have been improved through solid mastery of fundamental knowledge, broaden horizon, and frequent contact with those frontier achievements. Last term, for example, I tried to make a Li-Al-Fe-O compound. According to former literatures, Al2O3 and Fe2O3 appeared phase separation at high temperature, while my aim compound could not form in low temperature circumstance if solid-state synthesized. This was a conflict. I tried to use gel-sol method at first, but failed. After several days’ consideration, illumed by several newly published literatures, I decided to use high-energy ball mill. My idea was built on three facts. First, during the friction process, solid particles would become smaller, while the surface area increased. So, according to chemical reaction theory, their activity increased. Second, friction also generated heat. Relatively high temperature in partial areas helped the crystal growth. Third, some papers had reported alloy synthesized in this way. Final products supported my idea. Although their crystal structure was far from perfection, test results indicated a bright further. After taking part in four projects,[/color][color=black] not only my theories knowledge have been greatly enriched[/color][color=black][font=宋体]，[/font][/color][color=black]but also my experimental skills have been profoundly enlarged, such as mastering the use of[/color][color=black] X-Ray diffraction apparatus, SEM, high-temperature furnace, and high-vacuum desiccators. Because of my good performance and hard-working, I am now in charge of a project that involves basic exploitation of multi-electron energy story system, which is mainly about magnesium ion and zinc ion batteries. I believe I will learn a lot new from this experience as a project leader.[/color][/size]
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[color=black][size=3]As I mentioned in the first paragraph, I become growingly attracted by material chemistry. Solving problems delights me, and new materials produced be myself provide me with feeling of accomplishment. While, the more I learn, the more problems come. I want to find the truth of them. Further education is, of course, the best way. Thus, I decide to pursue a PhD degree. I believe it would benefit me and lead me to a good and self-interested career, to become a chemist, in the future. In the field of material science, USA plays a leading role. A large percentage of pioneer scholars work in the USA, and there is a better hard-ware environment, such as advanced apparatus and high-quality reagents. All of these would greatly help me realize my career and life goal. Therefore, I am determined to seek my graduate education in the USA. I have carefully reviewed the programs in your distinguished department. I think it suits me very well. Especially, Professor Patrick’s program on solid-state material, and Professor Yiying Wu’s and Professor Malcolm’s program on inorganic chemistry all interest me. Besides, Professor Heather’s program involving environment also seems interesting. Additionally, the surroundings of your school, described on your university main page, are satisfying. Because of above reasons, I would like to apply for the PhD program in your department. I am confident that, with my solid education background, experienced experimental skills, as well as consuming passion for chemistry, I can make a real contribution to your program. I wish you, honored application committee, would consider my application carefully. [/size][/color]
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[[i] 本帖最后由 紫眸天堕 于 2007-6-29 22:31 编辑 [/i]] [b][size=5]我PS的思路:[/size][/b]+A.I8mK;H6R M
[b][size=5]第一部分:自己对自己专业的从浅到深的认识[/size][/b]
[b][size=5]第二部分:自己的研究学习经历[/size][/b] ~_}3b+N0i
[b][size=5]第三部分:自己想出国读书的理由,想读那个学位的理由,选择对方学校的理由[/size][/b]
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[[i] 本帖最后由 紫眸天堕 于 2007-6-29 22:35 编辑 [/i]] 太好了，早看就好了，cv写完了，正在准备计划书 太好了，早看就好了，cv写完了，正在准备计划书 嗯，非常有用，谢谢！::31 经典，谢谢分享。 那本科呢，好象很多人都写了“一生中最难忘的一件事”。。。 学习ing! 先谢了，呵呵 很好啊，可以参考一下拉~~~ zan bm ::16 ::16 ::16 ::16 ::11 谢谢啊 好文！*L2``|ai g
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这几天也开始想思路了,正好看到LZ的这篇,可以参考一下了)l!x g0l Cv
谢谢::z1 感谢！！！！！！！！！正愁没法下手呢！！！！！！！！ 最近开始伤脑筋了，这个真的很有帮助！ 很受用
谢了~ ::31 对待写作模版,借鉴其语言,观点,视角,绝非内容*q;u+A&f4W:I9Q:\tT
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非常感谢啊 谢了，辛苦了 dddddddddddddddddddddddd 谢谢阿！ _ FVMN \lz和我一个专业的！ ::31 ::31 ::31 很有帮助，赞啦~bless! 学习下！
回复 3# 紫眸天堕 的贴子
hi,你要申OSU的Mr Wu Y. Y.? 感谢楼主的指点 太有幫助了 謝謝板主先~ ::z3 写得太好了 写的很好,学到了很好的思路! 辛苦了::31 多谢lz分享，值得一读。::81 发现我来了这么多次，似乎都是在潜水。PS憋了半天也没写出来，555 太感谢了，很受启发 借鉴一下拉 真好真好::z1页:
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