Please help me correct my grammar
Today i go to downtown for chaning my adress of banking. there is something speicial in downtown, a lot of people come here for the chrismasmarket. the chrismasmarket held before 11 day of chrismas. there is many beautiful houses in the market. and i pay 3.5euro for four strawberrie with sugar. i think if i told my mother i pay 35 rmb for four strawberries with sugar, she will kill me. [quote]原帖由 [i]小叮噹kim[/i] 于 2007-12-13 13:45 发表 [url=http://bbs.taisha.org/redirect.php?goto=findpost&pid=10204142&ptid=953800][img]http://bbs.taisha.org/images/common/back.gif[/img][/url]Today [color=Red]i go[/color] ([color=Blue]I went[/color]; "Today I go" indicates a future tense) [color=Red]to [/color]downtown(Just [color=Blue]downtown [/color]by particularity of that word's usage) [color=Red]for chaning[/color]([color=Blue]to change[/color]; "went to change") my [color=Red]adress of banking[/color]([color=Blue]banking address[/color]). [color=Blue]T[/color]here [color=Red]is[/color]([color=Blue]was[/color]; verb tense accord) something spe[color=Red]i[/color]cial [color=Red]in [/color]downtown(as above)[color=Blue]:[/color] (punctuation) a lot of people [color=Blue]have[/color] come([color=Blue]gone[/color]) [color=Blue]t[/color][color=Black]here [/color](verb tense accord, according locations) for the [color=Blue]C[/color]hris[color=Blue]t[/color]mas[color=Blue] m[/color]arket. [color=Blue]T[/color]he [color=Blue]C[/color]hris[color=Blue]t[/color]mas[color=Blue] m[/color]arket [color=Blue]was[/color] held [color=Purple]before 11 day of chrismas[/color] ("the eleventh day before Christmas" possibly?). [color=Blue]T[/color]here [color=Red]is[/color]([color=Blue]are[/color]) many("many" is plural) beautiful houses in the market. [color=Red]And[color=Black]([color=Blue]Also,[/color])[/color] [/color]("And" can't be used here because it doesn't continue the idea of the previous sentence) [color=Blue]I[/color] pay[color=Blue]ed[/color] [color=Purple]3.5euro[/color] (there are a couple of ways to write this, one, €3.50 or 3.50€ depending on locale, or "three and a half euros") forfour strawberrie[color=Blue]s[/color] with sugar. [color=Blue]I[/color] think if [color=Blue]I[/color] told my mother [color=Blue]I[/color] pay[color=Blue]ed[/color] 35 [color=Blue]RMB[/color] for four strawberries with sugar[color=Red],[color=Black](punctuation)[/color][/color] she [color=Red]will[/color]([color=Blue]would[/color]; conjugation in the conditional case works this way) kill me.[/quote]"f!sY!J2hPzRed corresponds to delete, blue corresponds to replace and purple is like red but expresses ambiguity.biJb*p.d Tsr&b.[K
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[[i] 本帖最后由 maebus 于 2007-12-13 14:42 编辑 [/i]] Thank for your help, It's very useful for me
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