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gwd SC 没有得到确定的答案

gwd SC 没有得到确定的答案

A recent review of pay scales indicates that CEO’s now earn an average of 419 times more pay than blue-collar workers, compared to a ratio of 42 times in 1980.

A. that CEO’s now earn an average of 419 times more pay than blue-collar workers, compared to a ratio of 42 times
B. that, on average, CEO’s now earn 419 times the pay of blue-collar workers, a ratio that compares to 42 times
C. that, on average, CEO’s now earn 419 times the pay of blue-collar workers, as compared to 42 times their pay, the ratio
D. CEO’s who now earn on average 419 times more pay than blue-collar workers, as compared to 42 times their pay, the ratio
E. CEO’s now earning an average of 419 times the pay of blue-collar workers, compared to the ratio of 42 times

DE没有that引导,排除
B主动比较compares,排除
A  earn an average of 结构很怪,不如BC把 on average 提前好,排除
所以我选择C
但是我在网络上搜索的答案选什么的都有,我手里的GWD答案是B。大家能不能帮忙提供一下比较确定的答案?

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我倒觉得选B比较合适,as compared to 42 times their pay, the ratio in 1980中as多余了,the ratio也完全可以省略,不如B的后半部分来得简洁,意义来得更加明白。compares主动没什么不可以,况且主动还优于被动。earn an average of结构没什么大错,关键是逻辑含义有歧义,它的对象可以是419 times也可以是CEO,有点模糊了。

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D 和 E 不对不是因为缺了 that(这里是可以省略的),而是因为 indicates 后面要跟分句,而 D 和 E 不是分句。

A 其实最好,只不过那个 419  times more pay 里面的 more 是有问题的词,令人不知道确实的意义是什么。

C 不好是因为 CEO’s now earn 419 times the pay of blue-collar workers, as compared to 42 times their pay, the ratio in 1980 读起来不太顺口。特别是那个 as compared to 42 times their pay 里面那个 their 不知道是指谁。

B 也不是什么好句。a ratio that compares to 42 times in 1980 非常不顺。

如果是我写就会是这样的:
A recent review of pay scales indicates that, on average, the pay for CEO’s is now 419 times that of blue-collar workers, while the ratio was only 42 times in 1980.

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有很多时候,这些题目里面的英文并不是很好的,所以大家做的时候常常会出很多问题。不要因为这样而气馁!

[ 本帖最后由 Asrgbf 于 2008-4-25 23:07 编辑 ]

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B,我觉得是这个。
A肯定不对,起码也应该是that of  blue-collar workers.
C我觉得不如B,而且句子读得别扭。

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楼上建议把 A 这样改:
A recent review of pay scales indicates that CEO’s now earn an average of 419 times more pay than that of blue-collar workers, compared to a ratio of 42 times in 1980.
但这样用 that 有点不妥,因为指的是 pay,所以要关照前面的 earn。可以改为 earn an average of 419 times more pay than that earned by blue-collar workers,不过这样很不顺。所以我的建议是:earn an average of 419 times more pay than what blue-collar workers earn。后面那个 compared to a ratio . . . 不好,所以我才改得好像三楼那样。

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回复 4# Asrgbf 的贴子

谢谢,受益匪浅。

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回复 5# otor 的贴子

A我认为是主语部分比较,所以倾向于改成
A recent review of pay scales indicates that CEO’s now earn an average of 419 times more pay than blue-collar workers do, a ratio compared to 42 times in 1980.

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C错。 as compared to 可以修饰 worker 引起歧义。所以选B

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今天做PREP上面又遇到了这道题,PREP的官方答案是C

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