这是我第一次开始写，所以感觉很不好。近一个小时就才写出来这一片。总感觉自己得用词不准，也不把握自己得句子是否正确，希望IBT写作高手们能指点下~~在此先谢过了~
139. What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? Why is this room more important to you than any other room? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.  

When be asked which room in a house is the most important room,different people maybe will have different answers.Some people will choose bedroom,because they love sleeping.The others will choose  living room,because they love meeting friends and staying with family.What about me?I consider balcony as my important room.

First,my house is at 20 layers of the 25 floors buliding!So when i stay at my balcony,i can see the special landscape.I can watch the birds flying below me,even i can feel the cloud blowing around me!What a fantastic  feeling!What's more i can see the sea in my city.The color of the sea may claim me down when i loose the temper or feel fidgety!

Second,i love the quiet which bringed by my balcony!Many people always come to my house talk with my father and the talking always disturbed me.As long as they begin to talk,i always hide in my balcony to evade the noise from the living room.As soon as i come in the balcony i feel come into the other world where is so quiet that i can read freely and ponder the problem which perplex  me for long.
The most important reason leads me to choose the balcony is i love wind.Maybe you will be puzzled and ask me is there any relation betwen wind and balcony!When i put my head out of the window of the balcony the modest wind will kiss my face.This feeling makes me very happy specially when i closed my eyes.I can forget any unhappy things to feel the coziness which bringed by wind.
To sum up,i love my balcony because the reasons above!Maybe you will love your balcony as me if you have a try to feel the quiet and wind.Don't wait,go to your balcony!

Word Count: 291

PS:红色得那部分 是不是错了 能这么说么

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