5，17就要考了，作文还没写几篇
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Which is more important for students to understand? Ideas and concept or learn facts.

It has been widely believed that ideas and concepts are crucial for students to understand, and it has also been injected deeply in students’ mind that remembering these abstract things, such as formula and definition, are far important than grasping the facts behind them, Especially in taking an exam. However, will these things guarantee students to be useful later in life. Hardly, but facts will.

To begin with, seldom can we do only with ideas and concepts as none of these can include all the situation likely. For instance, you may know the Pythagorean Theorem and the formula for counting areas, but most of the cases in real life are, not to mention triangle, irregular. You can also know Vt=Vo+at, but the facts tell you that, nothing can catch up with light. So, you can only use these ideas and concept in particular circumstances to support the facts which have no limit.

Furthermore, all the ideas and concept are not perfect enough or somewhat inaccurate, some may even be opposite to the facts and led us to the wrong way. Take a research about team work for example. Team work is thought to be more efficient and effective in handling a project, as the ideas and concept usually suggested. Looking into the facts, however, we found these quiet different beyond we had predicted. Team work always takes more time, because a census is hard usually to reach among team members, and even the decision made after meetings and meetings can not satisfy everyone or somewhat impractical in real situations. So, could we still only focused on the ideas and concept while ignoring the facts? The answer is obvious.

In conclusion, ideas and concept do important for students to understand, but grasping the facts will be more important. What we learned through abstract information are all serve to the ultimate purpose---deeper grasp the essence of facts.

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还有一篇~
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In today's world, to speak well is more important than to write well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


Speaking and writing are essentially a perfect coupling, yet more often than not, they are considered as divergent rather than consistent with each other. Speaking is composed with voices and pause, requiring a oral demonstration; while writing is consist of words and punctuation, need a good written expression. By casual juxtaposition, these two abilities seem to have little in common, however, there is one thing exceptional, they are and do important in modern society, especially the combination of both.

All to often, we are moved by the speaking in a presentation with tears roiling in our eyes. All to often, we are inspired by the speaking in an election, devoting our sacred ballot. All to often, our lives are determined just by our voices in an important interview. Whatever what kind of society we lived, traditional or modern, we are surrounded, more or less, by speaking. Can you deny the fact that it is essential for us to posses such a useful ability?

On the other hand, writing ability is also believed to be crucial in modern life, especially in demonstrating yourself to someone else. Take myself applying for aboard university for example. Excellent writing ability is necessary for me not only in TOEFL writing section, which contributes a lot to my final scores, but also vital in organizing an unique essays in an appropriate way to show my myself when application.

However, neither did a oral speaking can be well organized without an outstanding writing skill, nor did a writing press can draw public attention enough without the dissemination of voice. On the other hand, however, when these two abilities are combined together, an unpredictable inequality 1+1>2 will born. Thus, it is partial to say which one is better than the other as both of them have been playing an important role in modern life, and only when you mix them together can the best ability be formed.


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your essay is composed of clear structure, good!
but, don't use too much.....  you may, you can ,you should, or something like that
for instance.
you may know the Pythagorean Theorem and the formula for counting areas, but most of the cases in real life are, not to mention triangle, irregular. You can also know Vt=Vo+at, but the facts tell you that, nothing can catch up with light. So, you can only use these ideas and concept in particular circumstances to support the facts which have no limit.

nice.

恩，谢谢~
我开始只是想两个you may有点点排比的意思，不过现在感觉是怪怪的
那如果要表达这个意思改成什么好呢？

还有一篇，也帮看看吧~谢谢哦~

you may know the Pythagorean Theorem and the formula for counting areas, but most of the cases in real life are, not to mention triangle, irregular. You can also know Vt=Vo+at, but the facts tell you that, nothing can catch up with light. So, you can only use these ideas and concept in particular circumstances to support the facts which have no limit.

on this point. you can use"one, people,"or "we"to take the place of  the word "you".

on the second essay
you know what? Do you agree or disagree? You didn't give an definite answer.
But you have to give an answer.