6月7日，浙江工商考点的。
关于作文，之前做了大量输入工作，可是临到自己写，却时常憋不出好一点的句子。就像这篇作文都是憋了好久，才写出来……现在很着急，不知道就这20来天的时间怎么做最好。求教各位了
恩，又去写作版看，想加入蓝鹰，但不太明白他们那个具体是怎么加入？另外，我现在备考时间短，写作水平也有限的情况下，适合加入蓝鹰么？
希望牛人好人解答~ 先谢谢了
以下是作文：
It has recently been announced that a large shopping center maybe built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
While a group of denizens in our community doubt that build a large shopping center will be harmful to the existing business, and break the environment of our community, I think that it will bring more benefits than disadvantages. A large scale shopping center will offer conveniences to local residents and even aid the economic of developing.
Undoubtedly, a large scale shopping center will make citizens’ lives convenient through offering commodities at a low price, various sorts, and good after service nearby their home. At this level, local groceries cannot compete with it. A common case well exemplifies the shortage of local groceries, sometimes you are so desired about your favorite flavor ice cream, and you just went to a grocery to buy, unfortunately, the shopkeeper told you that they didn’t have it due to the limited sorts of goods in the shop. So you have to make a choice between taking the ice cream disliked and buying the wandering ice cream far away. I think this problem will be solved once the large shopping center opened, because of its numerous kinds of goods.
Besides, a large store usually could buy large quantity of goods at a wholesome price, so it can the sale price of its goods can always be lower. Needless to say, above-mentioned advantages of a large shopping center tempt local consumers and also give conveniences to them.
Additionally, a large shopping center can help to develop the economy of our community. AS we know, shopping centers make every measure to attract customers, such as free buses, the big discount, and so on.
Huge customer flew the shopping center brings, are able to appeal more other investment of constructing factories and shopping malls. Factories offer some jobs to local residents, so they can make salaries from there; At the same time, shopping malls that earn so much profit contribute to our community a considerable tax. All of that create a good invest environment, and promote the price of real estate in the community.
Lastly, I must point out that slight pollution of the environment will not be a problem under a serious and reasonable layout. In general, the conveniences and developments that a large shopping center brings outwit the disadvantages obviously, thus we should not “close the windows only to prevent the dust”.
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本帖最后由 noblegas 于 2008-5-16 10:10 编辑 ]
