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[口语] 口语一二题牛人请进!

口语一二题牛人请进!

讲一二题的时候一定要把序数词说出来吗或者说把原因1,2,3说得那么明显吗?这样会不会让rater感觉千篇一律很模版化得分反而不高呢?
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/ {! O1 o! w! C" I7 v( D2 h我给出两个例子,大家觉得哪种形式好?
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没有明显1,2,3reason的
! @2 R8 E2 D6 PIt is called “eagle”. It earned its name from its shape, like a lonely eagle, with a kind of quiet power overlooking the ground. It’s attractive to me because it’s so mysterious, as if it's holding a secret. When we got to the top of the mountain, we shouted “we are king of the world!”. You know the feeling of excitement when you have finally attained your destination—the feeling that you have conquered the mountain. And above all, you have conquered yourself. Later we sat on the top of the mountain quietly, hand in hand, and dwarfed by the stunning beauty of setting sun. I started to grow up here. It was like a second home, and it often remind me of my happiest recollections of childhood.
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明显1,2,3reason的
' v; X6 Z  p% S- g$ P) s3 X" F3 T“A city I would like to visit is Hong Kong.    First,   as is well known, Hong Kong is a paradise for shopping. Almost any world famous brand can be found there and the price is lower than that in Beijing.    Second,    I grew up with the TV series and films made by Hong Kong. I was so attracted by them as well as the city. Maybe I will meet my favorite movie star there.    Last but not least,    my best friend married a man who is from Hong Kong and she moved there last year. I miss her and want to visit her.”5 R8 }# E5 H' ^& ?5 R6 f4 d

$ g7 i2 }) e+ z2 L  c我听OG里面第一题的那个高分也是说得轻松随意,内容丰富但没有明显的reason3 |7 m& D1 h0 J3 H. c* R
大家给点意见,特别是口语得了高分的牛牛们
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回复 1# Shirley_fly 的帖子

123之所以重要是它能够让人一目了然,因为回答问题条理很重要。但是还有很多连词或短语也可以表示层次的,如and,therefore,furthermore,moreover,at last,on the one hand/on the other hand...这些当然也可以用,用好的话个人认为比单纯的123要好,但是这个需要练习,做到能够准确,自然,下意识就用出来。所以,用别的连词来代替123当然是可以的,并且更高级,只是有一定难度。用得不好,老是用错连接关系,就会起到相反的作用了。

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我觉得不要总用1,2,3什么的~~原因这种其实谁都说得出的~让考官听上去感觉你是在背书~6 z' s, w- d; X0 T& z
没有自己的内容~
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内容越充实越好~当然语速要上去

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我也觉得第一个段子好6 O) F5 @4 i( T* G' X" i; J8 z
没有明显的原因但感觉很自然. S$ p: k. c/ t  b- j: x& D
中间也有一两句话点题

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