Do you agree or disagree: It’s better to watch the serious movie that help people thinking than to watch movies that could amuse and entertain people? Apparently, with the society development. more and more people go to their great length to entertain themselves.Undoubtly,watchng movies is one of the most efficient way to enjoy themselves.However,whether wo should spend our time on the serious movies or the comic,may confuse a lot of people. To begin with, comic movies can help us to release our pressure which come from our daily life. At the newly age, all the people who want to succeed may have ensured many difficulties everyday and we should realized that we are just a humanbeings.Hardly anyone could make a living which is just filled with stress.Consequently,comis movies can play a significant role for us to release the pressure. According to the Yangchuan News Paper's statistics, the people who laughed 30 minutes everyday, who will have more advantages in their study,career,family-no one want to see a person just cry all the day！It may be obvious that watching comic movies will definitely help us in lots of aspect. In addition, it is unfair that certain people think the comic movies is superficial. Though I agree with the stamen that serious movies can help us to think, the comic movies is capable of this job. Have you seen the film called "MR. BEAN"?Many people consider this movie is just a movie which can amuse us.Notwithstanding,when I see the Mr. bean doing the foolish thing, I find the activity which is teasing by other people is reflecting the problem in the society, such as throwing the rubbish everywhere, breaking the other's door and so norm bean has caused me to think a lot about my selves and the mistakes which I have ever done. Only when we buried ourselves in the comic can we found the profundity in the movies. Above all, It may be easy for us to find the comic movies has more advantages than the serious movies. All in all, I prefer to enjoy the comic movie which is not only amusing us but also full of intelligences.

楼主要注意标点。标点后要空一格或两格。也有些词拼错了。改好后再发吧。

Do you agree or disagree: It’s better to watch the serious movie that help people thinking than to watch movies that could amuse and entertain people?

    Apparently, with the society development. more and more people go to their great length to entertain themselves. Undoubtely, watchng movies is one of the most efficient way to enjoy themselves. However, whether wo should spend our time on the serious movies or the comedy may confuse a lot of people.

    To begin with, comic movies can help us to release our pressure which gained from our daily life. At the newly age, ,most  people who want to succeed may have ensured many difficulties everyday and we should realized that we are just a human beings. Hardly anyone could make a living which is just filled with stress. Consequently,comis movies can play a significant role for us to release the pressure. According to the Yangchuan News Paper's statistics, the people who laughed 30 minutes everyday, who will have more advantages in their study,career,family-no one want to see a person just cry all day！It may be obvious that watching comic movies will definitely help us in lots of aspect.
    In addition, it is unfair that certain people think the comic movies is superficial. Though I agree with the statement that serious movies can help us to think, the comic movies is capable of this job as well. Have you seen the film called "MR. BEAN"? Many people consider this movie is just a movie which can amuse us. Nevertheless, when I see the “Mr. bean” doing the foolish thing, I find the activity which is teased by other people is reflecting the problem belongs to the society, such as throwing the rubbish everywhere, breaking the other's door and so on. Mr Bean has caused me to think a lot about myselves and the mistakes which I have ever done. Only when we buried ourselves in the comic can we found the profundity in the movies.
    Above all, It may be easy for us to find the comic movies has more advantages than the serious movies. All in all, I prefer to enjoy the comic movies which is not only amusing us but also full of intelligences.
    来啦！

[ 本帖最后由 terryxie007 于 2008-7-7 18:42 编辑 ]

我用 Microsoft Word 修改了，请看附近。记得开 track changes 和 comments。

哇！大大的感激！！！！！！ 愿上帝保佑您！
虽然我知道写得很差，但是这样大概能多少分呢？星期六考了。。。

[ 本帖最后由 terryxie007 于 2008-7-7 22:37 编辑 ]

我不知道是会怎样评分的。但是记得，要小心。不要拼错！

谢谢！