马上就考了 本来是想本本分分照模式写 可是昨天看了一篇新概念的课文 结果写出来就成这风格了。。不知道这种写法会给多少分？
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        Before going out of the "ivory towers" into the real society for work, seldom people find their school years so wonderful and lovely. Struggling with their heavy study load and numerous tests, students always consider themselves pitiful and want to get rid of the schools as soon as possible. However, there is no exception that all of them would recall their college years as the best and sweetest time after they finally get through of it.
        The mystery of the students' paradoxical emotion is that they simply don't realize the hardship of the outside society which is run by the Darwin's jungle rules, and then regret for not having cherished their simple and relatively leisure college years while they were actually getting through it hastily. After entering the majority of working people such as white collars or engineers, they suddenly find the ambitious prospect bubbling away and the fantasies of earning money and spending it as they wish are merely fantasies. What they experience is the huge pressure on their everyday work load and the constraint by their superiors and even co-workers. Looking back to the comparatively dependent and uptight life and the boring reading days in the library, they start to find them lovable and interesting. After all, the days are full of dream, ambition, and most important, the freedom.
         Besides the disillusionment rendered by the working experience after the college years, the comparison with the former schooling years also give the college years the validity of being the best. Consider the graded schools years when children are forced to work in school under the teachers' supervision and at home under that of their parents, when the pitiful pocket money is totally dependent on the performance of the children and the mood of their parents, when the compulsory courses are so boring but they have no way to escape them, and when they have to work harder and harder under the pressure of the College Entrance Examinations. There is no doubt that they seem to reach the heaven when they go to the college far away from home and have plenty of freedom in almost everything, no matter in money-spending or course-choosing.
         Surely people yearn for the childhood and the simplest high school years when they get older, the merely mention of the college times can bring the nostalgic heavenly recollection to their mundane life. After years of struggling with neither kind teachers nor accommodating classmates, without leisure of basketball games and hikings, or even reading a novel a kind of luxury, I believe that no one would deny that the college years are the best time in his/her life.

。```楼主还是把题目给出来才好判断呀 `