首先感谢无敌神猫版主的支持，因与原有奖翻译的活动形式不同，因此称之姊妹帖．
　本次活动采用翻译竞赛的形式，感兴趣的朋友请将自己的译文跟帖，到截止时间由公众和评委评比出最优译文予以奖励．所有参与者都有参与奖．
　具体奖品由神猫版主公布：
　如果活动进行顺利，以后继续主办续集．
本期题目如下，汉译英：
　一路上每到一地，不是登楼就是上塔，好像中国的文化传统都凝结在宝塔和古楼之上。第二天，我们继续文化之旅的征途，乘车来到北郊，造访了海宝塔。这塔相传建于公元五世纪，高五十四米，有九层，结构很奇特。如果拦腰给它一刀，呈现人们面前的将是“亚”字形的断面。登上海宝塔眺望，可见辽阔的银川河套平原。连绵不断的贺兰山脉横列在平原西侧，幽幽的紫蓝色，不见一点青绿。

[ 本帖最后由 yanding142857 于 2007-11-16 13:15 编辑 ]

翻译文字对提高写作水平有很大帮助，感谢楼主提供文段

这一期的参与奖励暂定为30学识+8威望


最佳翻译0~2名(视参与人数定),奖励50学识+8威望

活动截止日暂定为11月13日

希望大家踊跃参与







[ 本帖最后由 无敌神猫 于 2007-11-7 15:43 编辑 ]

Each stop on this way, we go to the building or the tower. It seems all the Chinese traditional culture are all coagulate on the tower and old building. On the second day, we continue our culture trip, we took the bus to the North Country, visit Haibao Tower. It was founded in the 5th Century,54 meters tall and has nine floors. The frame are very special. If you cut it across, There is a "YA"'s surface in front of people's eyes. Go up to the tower and look forward, you can see the wild Yinchuan Hetao Flain. Mountains lies across on it. The lavender color ,no more deep green.

好难啊,我翻译的好差,大家不要怪我

On the way  to every place, you have to climb either buildings or towers, in which it seems that Chinses cultures are all implecated. On the next day, we continued our trip on the culture, coming to Beijiao by bus and then visiting Haibao Tower. The tower, dating from the year 500 B.C, is 54 meters in height and has 9 floors, with strange structure. Intercepting it in the middle, you'll get a cross-section with a shape similar to the Chinese word "Ya". Get on the Haibao Tower, what can be seen is the vast Yinchuanhetao Plain, in the west side of which is Helan mountain, with lavender color, and without any green at all.
不行了，咱翻译不行，就这水平，把意思勉强说出来就不错了，原文的感觉一点没了

[ 本帖最后由 jasonflysky 于 2007-11-7 15:50 编辑 ]

我的..翻得不好见笑了..
There were many beautiful buildings and towers all the way,we can't help stopping and going to enjoy them.It seemed that  all the Chinese traditional culture are coagulated and shining on the top of these pagodas and old buildings.On the following day,we went to visit Hai Tower in the northern suburb by car,continued our trip in pursuit of culture.It is said that the tower was found in the 5th Century,it's 54 meters high and has 9 floors.Moreover,the frame of it is very special.If you cut it by the waist,you would see a transect of"Ya".Standing on the top of Hai Tower,you can appreciate a pretty scenery of the endless Yinchuan-Hetao Plain.The Helan Cordillera stretched on and on in the west of the plain,painted over with faint lavender,and no more green.

LZ让我想起了那个流窜份子

DZ跑来凑个热闹, 顺便看看小猫.
呦, 熟人还不少呢.
Traveling here and there, climbing pagodas, ascending towers, it seems to me that the traditional Chinese culture lies in these antique and quaint pagodas and towers. Next day, we continued our culture-seeking trip in a vehicle to the northern suburb, paying a visit to Tower Haibao, which was believed to be built during the 5th century AD, 9 stories, 54 meters in height, taking on a unique, fantastic architectural structure. A “亚” shaped cross section would be represented to us, if being transected. Approaching the top of Tower Haibao, you could get a better view of the vast, boundless Hetao Plain. Continuous Helan Mountain lies in the west of the plain, presenting a faint, shimmering violet, without any blue or green elements.

No matter where we went, The Chiese tradional culture wad deeply permeated in pagodas and old temples all the way long.We went to BeiJiao by bus to visit the Haibao Pagoda the next day, continuing our trip of culture seeking.
It is said that this pagoda was built in the 5th century and it had a unique structure which was as high as 54 metres with 9 floors.The shape of it would be exactly like 亚,a character in Chinese, if it is cut in the right middle.when standing at the top of that pagoda, we saw the very view that expansive YinChuanHeTao plain appeared and that really pleased my eyes.The lasting Helan Moutain lies by the west side of it and with its dark purple blue,we couldn't see even a little bit of green.

[ 本帖最后由 timothyluo 于 2007-11-7 17:16 编辑 ]

During this journey, except climbing the buildings or going up the towers on every scene, we don’t have other choices. It seems that all the culture of China is mixed in pagodas and old buildings.  One the second day, we continue this culture journey. We visit the Haibao Tower which locates in the North Country side. It is said that this tower was built in the 5th century with the height of 54 meters. This tower has a special structure: it has 9 floors, and if it is cut down along the line parallel to the horizon, you will see the section which looks like the Chinese word “亚”(Ya). When climb up the Haibao Tower and overlook the landscape around, we can see the far-flung Yinchuan-Hetao Plain and the continuous Helan mountain lies on the west of plain. Here, we could only find faint indigo among them without viridescence.

PS：这个美文不太美。。。

我也是，不过，咱们那个dudu可没这么有才
别让他看见这个贴子

dudu无处不在, 只是近些天热爱学习, 没工夫扁你.

大家翻译完后可以看看其他人的成功,评论下,或提提建议啥的更好

DZ都是退役球员了, 就暂不参与了, 又是繁忙的一天....
大家继续评论, 互相学习吧, 我写的匆忙没顾及太多, 纯进来看看. 时间不早了, 闪人.

We went upstairs wherever we reached all the way long, it seemed that the whole Chinese cultural traditions are perceptible from pagodas and historic buildings.We rode to the north suburb and visited the HaiBao Tower the next day, continuing our fantastic journey of ancient culture seeking. The tower is said being built in the 5th century and to be a strange structural, 54 meters high, 9 floors building. If somebody could cut it on its middle part, the shape of cross section would like “亚”, one character of Chinese. We can see the vast plain ----HeTao while we standing on the top of the HaiBao Tower. The successive mountains of Helan are wandering at the west of the plain, it appeared a royal purple color and could hardly find green.

we can't stop my step that is not purly clime the parvilion but also on the tower . it is seems that parvilions and tower are atributed to the chinese culture .and next day ,we keepon  our culture travling. we are visit HAIBAO tower in the north by car. it is said that this tower was built in 5 cets  .54 meters ,has 9 floors and it is also have a special feeling .if cut it from the middle ,it will be a"ya" in front of you . the last if you can stand on the tower , the boundless YINXIAHETAO plian in your eyes . you can also look  the great helan montain in the west of plian , you just taste a little purple and blue ,no more deep green.

DZ虽是退役球员,但余威仍足以震摄联盟..
个人觉得目前上稿的人里就DZ的最好了..
句式变换和句子结构都安排得非常好,特别是有些句子,我是用两句话来写的DZ兄只用一句就解决了....差距呀..
用词方面也不用多说..总就一赞字..

以上纯属个人意见,其它人表PIA我...

反正写作我是没任何见识的，我是被老师残害的那种类型，小时候老师不准我用从句，不准我加入个人观点，不准我使用逗号，还骗我英语里没有逗号，不准我写想当然的句子，不准我不打草稿，不准我写错词，不准我不分3段。
我回忆起来充满苦涩

楼上的训练方法虽然残酷了点，不过还真是提高的好办法