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托福写作:Country's Role

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  今天让我们来看看关于是否购买本国商品的讨论,看看范文是如何阐述的。题目如下:

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should buy products made in their country even if the price is higher. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

  NOTE TAKING

  Agree

  Promote economic growth 促进经济增长

  Development of the products 产品的开发

  概要

  generaization: globalization competition: inevitable 总述: 全球化竞争: 不可避免

  importing + exporting products: a common practice 产品的进口+出口: 常见的做法

  companies: attention from consumers in own countries + overseas 企业本国+外国消费者的关注

  thesis: agree (development of products,synergistic effect) 论点: 赞成(产品的开发,协同作用)

  Disagree

  Competition promotes advancement 竞争:促进

  Freedom of choice 选择的自由

  概要

  generaization: globalization competition: inevitable 总述: 全球化竞争: 不可避免

  importing + exporting products: a common practice 产品的进口+出口: 常见的做法

  companies: attention from consumers in own countries + overseas 企业本国+外国消费者的关注

  thesis: disagree (advancement, freedom of choice) 论点: 赞成(产品的开发,协同作用)

  范文展示

  AGREE

  As the world has become globalised, competition between countries is inevitable, and importing and exporting products from one country to another is a common practice. Thus, companies are striving for attention not only from consumers in their own countries but also from oversea through marketing, promotions and services. Some contend that shoppers should take advantage of their freedom to choose what they wish to buy. However, for two reasons, I strongly believe purchasers should buy products from their own countries even if the price is higher. For one thing, it will cause synergistic effort by keeping money in the country's economy. Moreover, it will promote the research and development of new products.

  First of all, purchasing products from one's own country with promote the economic growth of the country. To illustrate, if people in a nation refuse to buy mainstream goods from their country and favor imported commodities instead, both the corporations manufacturing the completed goods and the subcontractors manufacturing specialized parts and components will suffer. The consequence will be that there is a chance of the whole industry suffering hardship from economic difficulties.

  On top of that, companies are motivated to develop and improve their products when customers purchased them. They have a responsibility to meet shoppers' expectation. For instance, the Japanese are well known for buying commodities from their own country even if the price is higher than that of goods manufactured overseas. This phenomenon has stimulated the companies to produce better products as a way of attracting business. This practice will bring in higher profit and inspire companies to raise the standard of their goods, resulting in a synergistic effect.

  It's true that one of the notions of a democratic market is that consumers should have the freedom to decide what they want to pay for. However, if most people prefer imported products of better quality and lower price, it may result in a nation relying only on imported goods. For the reasons of economic growth and improved the product development, I agree with the statement that people should buy products from their own country despite higher price.

  DIAGREE

  As the world has become globalized, compelition between counries is inevitable, and impoting and exporting products from one county to another is a common practice. Thus, companies are striving for attention not only from consumers in their own countries but also from those overseas through marketing, promotions, and services. Some contend that shoppers should buy products from their own country even if the price is higher. However, for two reasons, Istrongly believe consumers should take advantagse of their freedom to choose what they wish to pay for. For one thing, competition promotes advancement. Morever, having feedom is a basic notion in a free market.

  First of all, competition provokes development. It is most likely that customers prefer a better-quality product for the same price. Hence, companies with expend a great amount of effort in order to deliver satisfaction to consumers. For instance, decades ago, people outside Korea hardly knew about electronics companies from Korea, As there are many electronics companies in Korea and competitions was getting stronger, each company invested a lot of capital to cultivate excellent researchers and gain strategic advantages. As a result the industry is now recognised as one of the leaders in the world.

  On top of that, customers should have the right to choose products according there will because each individual has different tastes and preferences based on their needs. For example, whenever I need to pay for a commodity, I consider the price first. Because I am a student, I go for product with the lowest price, not the one with better quality and higher price. Thus, I would be displeased if I had to purchase a product of the same quality butat a higher price.

  It's true that buying a product from one's own country would motivate companies to upgrade the quality of their products. However, the conviction that consumers would prefer locally made products to imported goods regardless of circumstances might dissuade some corporations from putting forth the effort to try to improve more. For the reasons of good-faith competition and freedom of purchase. I disagree with the statement that people should buy products from their own country even at a higher price.

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